Book by @wordywonders

Cover 10/10
It conveys the two main characters and setting, linking it fully to the story, and I love the style in which the characters are depicted presented with them semi-transparent. It adds to the fantasy effect of the cover in my opinion. One thing I want to let you know about is that your name is cut off at the bottom for me (as a mobile phone user).

Title 9.5/10
It fits the mood of the story well, and I do kinda like that you said "a dramione fanfiction", because I feel that's something readers should know when they click on a book. After reading the first ten chapters of the book, my interpretation of it is that Draco is fighting against his dad, aka the dark. I don't know if that's correct, but that's my understanding so far.

Characters 10/10
Since this is a fanfiction, I know you used almost entirely characters from the series, but you conveyed them well and made it feel as if we were actually in the story.

Plot/storyline 9/10
Enemies to lovers is a really popular trope, but I think you actually did it right. No secret crush on their enemy, just flat out "I hate you, you can't change it" (except when they inevitably catch feelings). There weren't any gaps in the story, and it was well paced.

Enjoyment 10/10
I don't support dramione at all (ronmione all the way, I love it!) but this book was really well done, and I could feel myself rooting for them a bit. I also loved your descriptions, they really enchanted the story and the way you described feelings made me feel what the characters were feeling.

Description 10/10
Honestly amazing, introduces the plot and uses what you know already about the series to further develop the blurb. It didn't really have any huge grammar errors as far as I could tell. One thing I recommend though is adding a space between the finishing sentence of the main blurb and "this is a dramione fanfiction".

Overall 58.5/60
Even though I only read ten chapters (I'm so sorry, I'll try to keep reading it soon! I really liked it but don't have much time), I feel the plot is well developed and at a good pace. I don't really have anything you should work on, other than a few grammar mistakes throughout the chapters.