Review #35
Book Title: Chocolate & Mon Cheri
Author: samihaahmad20
Genre: Short Story
Review: The title of the story is cute, it seems like a very cute love story. Indeed, it is.
The names are cute, one can use such words when they love someone dearly and soul-ly. Chocolate is one such person. Well, it was disheartened to learn that her husband is not by her side.
As our dear author stated, it is true that small gestures become memories. Same is the case with Cora aka Chocolate..
I loved that letter format and loved how you described Cora's emotion. Though, it would have been great if you had described what happened with Cora's hubby!
It's a beautiful story, though I'd like to extend an advice that you need to work on your language, just a little practice and it'll be alright.
A job nicely done! A nice read it was.
All the best for your future projects.
Rating: 7/10
Rating:
Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top