Review #30

Book title : Illusion of love

Author: _sk_fatii_3107

Review: the title of the story is very intriguing.

Truly, love is an illusion. In love,everything seems right, but it may not be right. You may feel that the person. Is tight, but he/she may not be right.

But, that doesn't mean that you never fall in love or never experience it.

This story "Illusion of Love" is a story that shows that love proves true in the way that you think.

The main characters - Hiba and Tabish are completely opposite to each other.

Hiba is the kind of girl who likes to keep her feelings to herself. She doesn't even talk nicely with her siblings. Okay! Her parents may keep fighting, but then she should have been home for her younger siblings.

Tabish is a young guy and he's very fond of his mother. I really like his gesture of making his mother happy. In this material world, no son is this conscious and caring about his mother.

Tabish's first encounter with Hiba was hilarious. I think he will be the one to understand Hiba the most. It's just that Hiba needs to do a little bit changes in her self.

To be rude to others, to scold the employees, isn't the way to vent out the frustration of her parents' bad relationship.

I really feel, this is going to be very interesting, once Tabish and Hiba come across. Moreover, I really liked Asad😉 He's the one who Can keep Hiba on track and I like him for that😅😅

All the characters are developed nicely. Hiba' anger, Tabish's politeness and softness, while Imran's mysterious Aura make this book more interesting.

Just a piece of advice, it would look better if you portray the emotions of the characters as well. For example: if Hiba is frustrated because of her parents, it should come out in other ways too, it shouldn't be anger always. It can be her thought process, or any past moment memory!

Overall, a very interesting book! Looking forward to read more.

All the best for future endeavours.

Rating: 4/5

A/N: I hope this review helps you, dear author! Thank you for participating!.

Hiba, tabish and Imran

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