Review #20

Book title : Journey of Life.

Author : AkshaKala

Genre : Romance

Review : The title of the story is quite interesting, so is the blurb. The three different characters, holding different attributes make a great story.

I loved Rehan, he is too soft, and very emotional. He loves Mia, but her happiness matters to him. There are less people who think this way. So, I am actually loving Rehan.

Mia is a sweetheart, but she shouldn't disrespect Rehan. He did so much for her. He made all the arrangements and is also keeping check on her, that's really sweet. Mia should understand his feelings.

Aditya, the spoilt brat is changed after meeting Mia. But will he really change? I do expect a heartbreak for Rehan, but silently I want him to be happy.

The characters are well developed, you have also maintained the suspense well. But, you do need to work on some aspects. In a few chapters, there si POV confusion. Like, it's Mia's POV, but there's third person POV included in the same. Also, there's spelling errors, but these can be rectified when you proof read the chapter. You should read the chapter, before you post it.

Rectifying the errors, this will make a great story. Well done, dear author.

Best wishes for future endeavours.

Rating : 3/5

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