A/N this is a story about Paul's daughter. I hope you like it.
Constructive criticism is welcome.
Enjoy.

Leune Blofis couldn't remember her father personally and knew nothing about her mother, but she did have a photo of him and some identification papers that said his name and stuff like that she also had a metioright pendant, the orphanage staff said it was dropped on their desk with a sign that said to give it to her. Leune is thirteen, has grey - blue eyes,slightly tan skin,dirty blonde hair that really is dirty and is practically a stick she is so thin, Leune lives in an orphanage, the children in the orphanage are not treated very well and do not have much,they don't get to take showers on a regular basis like most kids and didn't get very much to eat,it was greatly welcome when the orphanage got food donations. Leune other than being an orphanage girl wasn't too different than any other kids he age,she had ace and a gap between her front two teeth,she was pretty smart considering she didnt get a normal education, she got bullied in the orphanage by the older kids,they usually stole half of her meals, but being deprived of the food over a while had made her weak so she couldn't even fight for her food back. Leune was very secluded in the orphanage, there was no one her age, there were the babies, the younger kids ages 4-7 and there were the bullies, the older kids, ages 15+. Leune didn't fit into any of these categories,she was alone.

Leune's life changed that day,the cold day in May,it was the twenty-third, she was officially thirteen and five months old that day,not that she had anything to celebrate. It was a normal day at first. Leune was walking to the next apartment in the route, she was collecting donations for the orphanage. Leune looked up from the seven dollars and seventy-five cents to see a woman,well sort of woman,her upper half was that of a normal woman age twenty-five,but her bottom half was two snake trunks she sort of walked sort of slithered on. You must be thinking 'that's not real there aren't creatures like that' and your right,ever sins Leune was nine she had started having these hallucinations, no one believed her when she said she saw these ceatures and after a while she gave up on convincing evryone,she was wrong,they weren't real,just part of her imagination,getti ng half of her already small meals each day probably didn't help with them. Even though Leune knew these creatures were only a trick of her eye she always tried to avoid them not wanting someone to think she was insane. The woman was chasing a girl slightly older than herself, fourteen maybe? This girl looked scared out of her mind, like she was seeing the same thing as Leune was,but she knew that was impossible,the girl was probably just running away from her mom because she was in trouble. The girl ran into an ally one quarter a block away,the woman was about to enter the ally and keep chasing after the girl when she turned and looked after Leune. Leune felt a shiver ho down her spine as the illusions gaze landed on her. She was about to keep going with her route,but the woman started walking towards her. Leune was stuck she couldn't move,the woman's eyes had turned her to stone,the menace more than any she had ever seen before,even in all of the bullies eyes combined. She couldn't move, terror was coursing through her veins. The woman was meters away now. Leune didn't know what to do. The woman lunged at her,at the last second Leune felt her limbs move and get out of the way without her command,but once she had started moving she got back in control the woman seethed,I turned around and ran for my life, I went down the same ally as the girl who was being chased earlier. I saw the girls at the end O's the ally,it was a dead end. The girl looked at me horrified,but as I got closer I realized she wasn't looking at me she was looking behind me. I turned to see the woman. Something caught my eye up in the sky I couldn't tell what it was,ic didn't have the best eyesight,i could still see just fine for the most part,but I couldn't see little details from far away. I felt myself get tackled,the woman had attacked me while I was distracted. She clawed at my arms,she seemed thrilled by the screams escaping my mouth,she seemed to be feeding off them. I felt lightheaded,from the lack of oxygen due to my screaming along with the agonizing pain of her clawing my flesh and because of the major blood loss. I was trying to fight back but she had me pinned,there was nothing I could do but wait for death. My lungs were screaming for air I could not provide,it felt like they were colapsing in on themselves. My vision was turning blurry as I awaited the inevitable,then I blacked out.

A/N hope you like the story
I'll try to put up the next chapter soon.