3rd person point of view

"Clear!!!" The doctor screams and he tries to resuscitate Rachel Dupree. "We are losing her doctor." The nurse says in a panic. Suddenly her heart monitor beeps and her heart rate is gone. She has no pulse. Her friends stand there in shock and begin crying as they see their friend dead. "Sorry, but Rachel has passed I'm sorry for your loss." The doctor says sadly. Maria, Lucas, Craig, Lola, and Sabrina all stare at their friend who just passed away all because she took her life. Their friend just lays there lifeless. "Why didn't she tell us she was feeling this way we could have helped her sooner." Craig says. Craig slowly rubs Maria's back. Maria is a crying mess because Rachel was like an older sister who helped her through all the depression in her life. Lucas felt so upset because he lost the love of his life. "I'm gonna kill that fucker who was one of the reasons why my beautiful girlfriend did this." Lucas growls and storms off.

Narrator's POV
Thats so sad this happened. She was only 17 when she took her life. She was about to be 18 in about 5 days. What a shame someone as beautiful and as kind as her took her life just like that. She was known for putting others before her and making them feel happy. Everyone always came to her when they were upset or mad. She always knew what to do to help them. All the things that happened in her life made her suffer immensely. She hid her depression really well. People knew she had it, but she was so good at faking smiles that you think she was happy meanwhile on the inside she was dying and suffering. You might all be wondering why and how Rachel Dupree took her life. Well it's a sad story of how and why she did this and I'll tell you the story.

3rd person point of view.

September, 6th, 2001

Mary gave birth to a little baby girl who weighed 7lbs 3oz. She named her Rachel. Mary sees her husband rush in. "What took you so long?" Mary asks her husband. "You weren't there for me while I was giving birth to our daughter. Your Aunt was with me and you know I dont really like her." Mary says a bit annoyed. "Sorry I got caught up with work. My boss was being a dick and wouldn't let me off work early im sorry baby." Carlos says to his tired annoyed wife. Carlos grabs marys hand and kisses it. "Can I see our little baby girl?" Carlos says. Mary nods and hands over Rachel to her husband. "Ah babe shes beautiful. What did you name her?" Carlos says yo his wife. "I named her Rachel." Mary says. "Thats a beautiful name darling." Carlos says and kisses his wifes cheek.

3 years later

Carlos's point of view

Fuck my boss is such an asshole he knows I have a fucking kid why does he do this to me and make me work late hours like this. I barley spend time with my own daughter this is bullshit. I sigh and walk into my house. "Honey I'm home!!" I say sweetly. I look around and it seems pretty quiet. "Honey?" I say curiously. I suddenly hear my little girl crying I run into the room and see my little girl crying hard. And I see my wife brushing my daughters hair really hard to the point where shes screaming and crying it hurts. Anger fumes in me. And I rush over to my wife and take the brush out of her hand. "What seems to be the big idea hurting our daughter like that you see shes crying and in pain. You gotta be gentle with her hair shes still pretty little." I say a bit angrily but calm. "Her hair is fucking knotted like hell im trying to get all that out." She screams. I sigh and hug my little girl whos a crying mess and pet her hair. "She not a doll where you can put makeup on her and dress her up like a hooker dear." I say. "I don't give a flying fuck she needs to look good cause tomorrow me and her are seeing my mother tomorrow." She says angrily. "Okay but dont hurt our only kid." I say. I bring my little girl to her room and rock her gently to calm her down. She slowly calms down. I wipe her tears. "Sweetie want me to brush your hair from now on?" I ask. Rachel nods. "Okay don't worry princess i'll do your hair." I say and kiss her forehead. She giggles. I sigh as I hear my wife open the front door and slam the door. Well I know where shes going probably to one of her guys friends houses. I sigh. I smile as Rachel kisses my cheek. I know she doesnt like when im mad or upset with my wife. "Im fine hun. Dont worry about me." I say and ruffles her hair. She giggles. I look at the time and it says 11pm. I lift her up and put her in her bed and tuck her in. "Its way past your bed time sweetie time for bed." I say and kiss her forehead. She yawns and nods and slowly closes her eyes. "I love you my little princess and I always will." I whisper to her and shut the light off and head out of her room. I slowly go to the balcony to smoke. I dont like smoking in the house because I have a kid. I sigh and bring the cigarette to my lips and light it and I blow out smoke. I sigh. Ugh i hate my wife is acting the way she acts ever since her mom started to get on my wifes case about our daughter not being a girly little girl shes been acting this way. Shes been trying to put our daughter in dance and dressing her up way too much and in the process hurting her with all the blow dryers and curling irons to our little girls hair. I dont like this at all i have been talking to my wife about this but this doesnt really work she just curses me out. This is just stressing me out too much. Its a good thing I am off tomorrow from work. My wife works tomorrow so im gonna have some daddy daughter time with my little girl which makes me so happy. I suddenly hear my phone ring. I look at it and i see its my mother in law. Fuck my wife probably told her what went on between me and her. Fuck im not talking to her all she does is curse and scream at me. She doesnt even like me. I let it go to voice mail. And I play it on speaker. "Hey listen here you loser cigarette smoking piece of shit why the fuck did you yell at my daughter like that!? shes your fucking wife shes trying to help make your daughter pretty. What the fuck is wrong with you. All you do is work all day and when your home all you do is sleep all goddamn day. You do nothing to help your fucking daughter. My daughter does everything for her you do jack shit!!! I dont want you at my house tomorrow at all after my daughter finishes work shes taking your daughter my house and your wife and my grandchild are sleeping over your smoking ass can just rot in this house of yours. They will be back the next day." My mother in law screams on the phone. The voice message is done. I sigh. My wife is such a liar I wasnt even yelling at my wife I was being calm. She was the one who was screaming the house down. I put my cigarette out and go inside to and sit down on the couch. I grab my guitar and start strumming it and singing a bit of the a song I like to sing to my little girl when she has a nightmare or sometimes when shes upset. "When this world is no more. The moon is all we'll see. I'll ask you to fly away with me. When the stars all fall down. They empty from the sky. But I dont mind if youre with me then everythings alright.

The next day

Still Carlos's point of view

I'm home alone right now my wife and my daughter are at my mother in laws house. So I start writing songs. Especially one im working on for my daughter. Suddenly I get a phone call from my mother in laws house phone. I answer it. "Hello?" I say. "D-daddy." I hear my daughter say while crying. "Yes princess what happened?" I asked worried cause shes crying. "M-mommy a-and grandma h-hit me...cause i dropped a plate *hic* I-i wanna go home." She says crying hard. "Dont worry I'm coming to get you princess." I say and hang up the phone. What the fuck is wrong with my fucking wife and my mother in law she just made a fucking little mistake. Shes just a little girl. They shouldn't be hitting my little girl like that. I rush to my car and drive to my mother in laws house and pick up my daughter. I put her in her car seat and take her for a drive since shes not calming down. I drive her to her favorite place which is a beach not too far from our house. I hold her and sit by a bench by the water. I rock her and sing the song that calms her down. She calms down. "Ill have a big talk with your mommy princess and with your grandma." I say. She nods. I kisses her forehead and she smiles a bit. "Daddy." She says. "What is it princess?" I ask. "Grandma says your a fucking piece of shit and no good." She says shyly. "Well dont believe what your grandmother says shes a liar and so is your mother." I say. Now im really gonna talk to my mother in law and my wife about this she is making our little girl repeat bad words. I hold back my anger cause my little girl was already frightened enough from her mother and grandmother. I sigh and take her home cause my little girl is asleep in my arms. As soon as I get home I put my little girl in bed and put her with her favorite stuffed animal which is a black lab plushie named Millie after my sisters dog. I sigh. I cant believe this is happening. I go to the bathroom to wash my face. I hear a bing from my phone and I see its a text from my friend paul. I read it. "Hey Carlos... Im at a strip club right now and I see your wife... I guess she works at a strip club... I never knew that... Anyways shes giving a lap dance to another man and making out with him." Paul says in disbelief through text and sends a whole video of it to prove it. I watch the video and I start getting so mad. So this is the job my wife has on some nights when she is working late. I don't think I can go through with this anymore. I think im getting a divorce from her. She does this behind my back and hurts my little girl. There is no way in hell imma have this happen. I begin to cry. I really care about my wife and love her dearly. Why did she have to do this to me. And our little girl who loved her too. I begin to take out a beer out of the fridge and drink it. Fucking hell. This is how my wife of 11 years treats me. She treats me like im a fucking loser and piece of shit. I sigh and drink more.

Mary's point of view

After I fucked that guy I drugged him and stole all his money. And I leave him in the private room and I lock the door. I slowly put on my jacket and begin to head back to my moms house cause shes pissed that my husband took our daughter home. As Im about to head out the door my boss stops me. "What seems to be the problem boss? Im just about to leave and go home to my family." I say. "Mary we need to talk about all your bad behavior." He says. "What did I do wrong sir?" I ask. "What you did wrong is make out with a patron your not supposed to do that you fucking whore." He screams at me. "Plus i know your little secret you drug all the people you give lap dances to and steal all their money." He screams more. I stand there pissed cause I knew one of the girls snitched on me which im going to beat up later for being a fucking snitch. "YOUR FIRED!!!" He screams at me one last time. I slap him and spit in his face. "Good for nothing bald ass ugly ass looking fucking piece of shit i didnt need this job anyways I only took this job to fuck guys cause my husband aint good in bed!!!!" I scream and storm out and head back to my moms house. I begin rush back and as soon as I come in the house my mom jumps down my throat. "Of course you fucking had to fuck every tom dick and harry. You know im fucking sick and you shouldnt be gone that fucking long you bitch!!!!" My mom screams at me. "Calm down alright im here now." I say sighing. "Stop your shit alright you need to be with your fucking kid!!!" My mother screams. "Wheres Rachel mom?" I ask. " YOU DUMB FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT I TOLD YOU YOUR HUSBAND TOOK YOUR DAUGHTER AND BROUGHT HER HOME GODDAMN I HAVE SUCH A DUMB DAUGHTER YOUR BROTHER IS MUCH SMARTER THAN YOUR DUMB ASS!!!" My mom screams at me more. I storm off to go get a bottle of wine and I open it and i chug the whole bottle. IM GONNA KILL THIS FUCKER WHEN I GO BACK HOME. I sigh more. I slowly slump on the floor i suddenly get a text from one of my old college fuck buddies. I smirk as i read the text. "Hey mary its me jake. Its been a while i was wondering if you know wanna hook up? I know we havent hooked up since college but i missed you and your body so god damn much baby girl~ please meet me at my house im still living by the college. Its okay if you dont want to i understand alright lmk okay beautiful." I text back sure id love to come ill be there right away. I go get dressed and ready and head to jakes. As soon as i get there i knock on the door jake opens the door and he kisses me hungrily. Fuck i missed him so much he knows just how to turn a woman on~ i slowly enter his house still kissing him and i rip off my shirt showing my lacy black bra. "Papi likes baby girl~" he says sexily. *time skip brought to you by me being a depressed bean* i pant. "That was amazing hun thanks for that so much." I say. "No problem hun ill take good care of my baby girl no matter what." He says.

Carlos pov

My wife texted me she'll be back soon and shes not back yet. I can't wait to tell her off when she comes back if she even comes back...... I hear the door open and I see my wife with all hickeys on her neck. She is abusive to our child and a cheater. Im really gonna go off on her now. "Hi honey how are you?" I ask with a fake smile. "Good." She says. "Why did you take our daughter from my mothers house?" She ask. "I did that because you and your mother abusive to our only daughter!!!" I scream. "SHE FUCKED UP A PLATE KIDS NEED TO BE DISCIPLINED LIKE THAT!!!" She yells. "No our child doesnt!!" I say. "FUCK YOU IM LEAVING YOUR SORRY ASS AND IM TAKING OUR DAUGHTER!!" She screams.

(Hiya its me jess imma leave it off here bye love you guys ill continue more later ill also edit this more too)