so, I decided to work a bit on the introduction/planning of my Fleur Delacour fic since my brain stopped working for Whispered Words. anyway, I've come up with two different ideas for the synopsis of Language Barriers, and I'd like some opinions please

so, here's idea one.

and idea two

not much actually changed, besides the first paragraph but I can't decide. I'm also thinking of changing the title and the layout of this book too, but that's undecided. anyway, please let me know what y'all think!