What do you think about the title of this chapter?exciting?

Let's begin.....

Sameer pushed Suhaan from Ragini.and Surbhi held her.
He falls near the entance.
Ragini was still in shock.
He moved a little gaining conscious after he hit the ground.
Jaya comes there and sees the scenario.
Sameer:what is he doing here?
Suhaan stood with much difficulties:i am sorry.i am sorry.i am sorry.
He mutters continuously crying.
He falls near Jaya's feet and cries:please maa please i beg for a one last chance to prove myself.please i would be a Good son,Good brother,Good husband and Good father.last chance to prove myself!
Jaya :i told you what i had to say the other day only.if you disturb us like this then i will call the police.
He holds her feet:maa please..please one last chance.please accept me back.

Sanskar from behind: WOW...you need chance.Given.show us a glimpse that how you would be a good son.we all have seen being a good son you left your own dad to die!
Suhaan:Sanskar trust me..
Sanskar:Trust?? Do you even know the meaning.. just some day back you were laughing thinking i died. You were laughing on your own mother's misery. You were laughing at your wife.. sorry something needs to be added EX Wife's trust as a foolishness.You were laughing at your own family thinking that they would be on road or dead and now again you want us to trust you?
Suhaan moves to beeji:beeji i..you love me so much right.more than anyone then ask them to give a chance to me please.
While beeji stepped back turning her face.
Sanskar:who the hell wants to get betrayed by you again.hum sab pagal hogaye hai yahan ki tumhe chance denge.you came with this thought that's what astonishing me!
Suhaan blinked his eyes which felt heavy for him but he was determined to save himself and actually not for the chance.since the creditors have found him and with the fear that they would kill him,he was here,if they accept him then this will be the safest place!

Suhaan looked at Ragini:Ragini..Ragini needs me!
Sanskar:she doesn't!
Suhaan moves to her and holds her hands:you are still in love with me right.that's..that's why you didn't move on yet.you love me isn't it?you love me that's the reason you are staying here with my family waiting for me.isn't it?i know Ragini that you are willing to give me a chance.
She tried to free her hand:leave my hand..
Jaya moves to them and tries to pull him.
Suhaan:maa you don't want to give me a chance then that's fine.that's totally fine.at least let me live with my wife and my daughters.they need me..they need me the most.
Jaya:i said leave her.
Suhaan:Ragini..she loves me still or else why would she stay with you or she didn't move.i came back...i came back for you and our daughters!
Ragini was feeling week and him in front of her was traumatising her.his each and every word were irritating her.
Suhaan:i am gonna take my wife along with me.she have no rights to stay with you when i am not here!
Suhaan drags her out of the home.he know that his family loves her a lot if she accepts then they will accept him back.
Jaya and surbhi and Sameer moves following them.

While Sanskar's eyes falls on Siya Soha who were standing in the corner.these noises broke their sleep.
And they came out and saw all of this.
His heart clutched seeing them crying.
Beeji also looks at them.
Siya:he is our daddy?
Sanskar looks at them.
Soha:Chaachu you told us that daddy is so far then dada ji.
He signs them to come to him.
And they moves to him.
Sanskar:He is not your daddy!
Both looks at him and he wipes the tears from her eyes.
Soha:Daddy..is not our hero.
Sanskar had no answer with days passing their questions have increased and his so called brother is knocking up in their life again and again!

Jaya:Suhaan i am telling you to leave her.
She tried to stop him.
Ragini pulls her hand from him:now you remembered that you have a wife and daughters or your condition now reminded you that we exist?

Suhaan:everyone should be given a second chance.so i too deserve a second chance.Ragu..
Ragini: Don't call me that.and second chance is given to the one who can rectify it but you are here to break us more and for your own selfish reasons!
Suhaan:Yes the selfish reason to have you back in my life.
And these noises gathered the neighbors there,who started to gossip.
Suhaan:then what is the right that you are staying at my home.why are you still here!
Jaya:i let her stay here.i made her to stay and to question this you are no one.because after my elder son left it was this girl who supported us in our tough times.even if i sacrifice my life for her still i cannot pay back her for whatever she did!
Suhaan:she is my wife that's why she was able to do it for you.because of me she was in the home so she could help you and support you!
Ragini:now all credits to you.i did all because of you?....why in world it always gave first priority to a husband then wife..why?now whatever i do and the credits goes to you(she smiled sarcastically with tears glittering in her eyes)and husband is given the place of God even if he is like you but i am no mahaan or mujhe tum jaise pati ke zaroorat bhi nahi hai..i would stay alone all my life at least there would be some peace rather then staying with you!
Suhaan:Ragini we took the 7 vows together..
Ragini:vows?really?which was all a part of drama for you,if you were little shameful,you would have not come here asking for the rights.this actually shows how selfish you are!

Suhaan laughs:you should be grateful that i am accepting you back tum konsi dhoodh ki dhuli hui ho?you stay here because there is Sanskar or Sameer pata nahi kya....
Jaya slapped him hard.
Everyone was shocked.
Ragini was shocked listening him.

A man who was their neighbor:Call the police and hand over him that's the least he could get but still he should be punished.
To which every of their neighbor agrees.
Suhaan:what happened maa?this is the truth... can't agree to it?kyunki sach tho kadwa hota hai na maa.
He looks at Ragini.
A lady:but i feel suhaan is also right then why would Ragini stay...
And her own daughter looks at her and she couldn't continue further.

Tears rolls down her eyes:har koi tum jaisa nahi hota.well it's not astonishing that listen such things from you.it's some what expected,because you always have to spoil pure relations right!
Suhaan was about to pull her when Sanskar stood in between them.
Sanskar:ho gaya.after these try also there is no place for you in the home.last time i let you go what should i do this time.and also should i make you remember that you and Ragini are officially divorced now.
Suhaan:it was just my anger i didn't mean it really.i really didn't and i don't agree with this divorce.
Sanskar:who would bother if you agree or not!

When a car stops followed by few other.
All looks.
He was jignesh who had a good relation with Sanskar and Suhaan took huge amount as a credit from him in name of his dad.whom jignesh respected a lot but still he was a goon so nobody messes with him.

Jignesh:i knew that you will be here.
He joins his palm in front of Jaya:Pranaam maatha ji!
Jaya looks on.
Suhaan was scared:please please Sanskar ...
Jignesh:kismat bhi badi kutti cheez hai..you are asking the help from one who suffered because of you?(he shouts)Oh God you are great, I didn't believe earlier that everyone would have their own time.this son of this family deceived them years back but now he is under their feet to save himself.hai krishna maan gaya tumhara khel.sabka apna apna time hota hi hai.
While his goons sends off all the neighbors.

Jignesh:considering as this family i would have let all of debts free.but what you left in this family?
Sanskar:we would be grateful if you take away this person from here.
Suhaan:Sanskar... sanskar no..please.Ragini i am sorry.please please..
He was about to move to Ragini who was standing behind Sanskar.but Sanskar doesn't let him go to her.
Sanskar:Surbhi..take mom inside!
Surbhi nods and she takes her inside and she nods Sameer also moves.
Suhaan shouts:Maa..maa please maa considering as an outsider protect me maa!
Jaya cried but still she didn't wanted to help him because she always considered him as murderer of her husband,whom she can never forgive and he deserves the greater punishment!

Sanskar:Ragini!!
Ragini was looking at suhaan who joined his palms crying requesting her.
Sanskar: Ragini.. move inside.
She looks at him and tears were dangling in her eyes.
She couldn't move.she know it was Suhaan's another drama but she was hurt again why she cannot tolerate him in problem!
Jignesh:behen he is doing the drama that's all.you know how he is better than anyone here!
Sanskar :Ragini..
She nods and move inside.

Suhaan shouts:Ragini..At least you..you loved me we had so many beautiful memories.
She turns:no...those are the nightmares which is not even leaving me.it would leave me when you would completely out of my life.
She ran inside the home.and sits in the corner of her room.

While Sanskar looks at Suhaan:you need to see this that by doing any kind of drama no one would support you still because the wounds you gave years back are still fresh!
Jignesh: it's not that I couldn't catch you all these days Suhaan.
Suhaan looks at him.
Jignesh:just because Sanskar asked me i let you go all these days but not more..
Suhaan looks at sanskar.
Jignesh:i knew that you were staying Gold Star hotel i knew it already do you know who paid for your stay all these 2 months.Sanskar!!
Suhaan cries:please Sanskar this time save me..
Jignesh:wah.. karo karo nautanki!
Suhaan:Sanskar please!
Sanskar turns and moves.
Suhaan was about to move:Sanskar..Sanskar please!!
But the goons held him.

He enters inside and closed the door and stood there.
Suhaan took the huge amount which no one can pay back.Sanskar had once made a mind to help him but it was too much that he cannot pay back.he even spoke to Jignesh about this to settle some amount give him some time ..and in return jignesh gave him a time to think for whom he is doing this..and he was right Suhaan can never be anyone to him or his family then why should he help him.it was enough that all ties with him are broken now even the humanity!
He looks at his mother who crying hugging Surbhi.
Sameer:Maa don't cry he deserves it.don't waste your tears for an unworthy person.
She nods and wipes her tears.

Suhaan shouts when he was taken by the goons:maa..maa please.Ragini please save me Ragini!!
Ragini could listen shout she covers her ears with her palms.she don't want to fall weak!
And someone wipes her tears.
And she looks at her daughters who were kneeling in front of her.
Soha:Mumma don't cry please!
Siya:he is a bad uncle who will not bother us from now on.Chaachu promised us!
And jignesh takes Suhaan with him.

Sometime passed.
Both the kids was sleeping placing their head on her lap where they were still sitting on floor.
Sanskar enters her room along with Surbhi.
Surbhi picks siya and places her on the bed while Ragini places soha on the bed and covers the comfort on them.

Sanskar:Ragini i want to talk to you!
Ragini wipes her tears and then faces him:Now?
He nods.
They move out...

She sees everyone were still present there.
Ragini:now let's don't talk about Suhaan please!
Jaya: it's not about Suhaan!
Ragini was still crying as she couldn't control her emotions and she looks at her.
Jaya:After all these happened i want you to marry again and start a fresh!
Ragini cries: that's not possible with me now i am not ready to start a life with a unknown person, I don't know how he will be with my daughters,my life has no meaning now.so i will concentrate more on them now.
She smiled through the tears and was about to move.

Sanskar:Marry me!!
She got rooted listening him.
Sanskar:Will You Marry Me Ragini?

*So do you think Suhaan should have given a chance or let him go from jignesh?how do you think Sanskar have answered siya soha's questions?and what you think about Sanskar's proposal?what will be Ragini's reaction?*

To be continued.............

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