Me: Thanks for coming back guys to read. Okay, Trunks is here to introduce the chapter.

Trunks: Hey guys, thanks for reading and commenting on the story so far. Hopefully it keeps going on.

Me: Now on with the show.

Trunks: Hold on, how come everyone else had longer lines before when they introduced chapters?

Me: (Laughs nervously) Someone start the story quickly!

Trunks' POV

As the ship landed on Planet Luud, I had this horrible feeling that was nagging in my chest. I felt like Max and the others were in trouble. When the ships doors opened, I was the first out with Goten and Mirai following right behind me. (It's still sort of strange, future version of me.)

"Goku, let's get going." I told him.

"Just a sec," Goku said as he dragged the tied-up Para Para brothers off of the ship.

"Please don't take us inside!" Don Para begged.

"Do whatever you like to us, just please don't take us in there!" Bon Para said.

"Cardinal Muchie Muchie is sure to be mad!" Son Para cried.

"Who the heck is Cardinal Muchie Muchie?" Goten asked.

That's when we saw Giru flying towards us. "Girls in danger! Girls in danger!" he repeated.

I didn't need to think through what Giru had said. I just took off to the skies and tried to feel for the girls, only to find that I couldn't pick up their energy. 'Why can't I sense them?' I thought to myself. 'They can't be....' I shook off the horrible thought and continued to fly. Only one thing mattered at that moment, finding Max.

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Max's POV

Why couldn't I move my arms? Why was I frozen? I tried to speak but I couldn't move lips.

'Hello?' I tried to say. 'Can anyone hear me?'

'Max?' Callia's voice spoke through my head. 'Is that you?'

'Callia?' I asked. 'Where are you?'

'Max? Callia?' Lucy's voice spoke. 'Where are you guys? Why can't I move?'

'Hello?' Pan's voice spoke. 'What's going on guys?'

That's when I opened what I thought were my eyes to see that I was on the ground. I tried moving my arms again but nothing happened. When I looked around, I saw that Lucy, Callia and Pan were on the floor as well. 'Guys, I think we've been turned into dolls.' I told them.

'I don't want to be a doll,' Callia said. 'It's just not right.'

Suddenly, we were picked up off of the ground by that Cardinal. 'Uh oh,' Lucy said, 'This is bad.'

Cardinal Muchie Muchie laughed. "These 4 might not of had the dragon ball but their energy will help in the revival of Luud." He said. Just when we were about to be thrown into the little pot, the whole area began to shake and Muchie Muchie dropped us to the ground.

'What happened?' Pan asked.

I looked up towards the ceiling and was glad to find that the guys had arrived. 'It's the guys!' I said with joy. 'They came to rescue us! Guys we're here!'

They didn't hear me. 'Oh this is just great,' Pan said. 'They can't hear us.'

That's when came running by. 'Giru! Over here!' Callia yelled.

The robot stopped and looked at us and began to pick us up.

"Signs of life present," Giru said. "Must get to the others."

'Yes Giru,' Lucy said. 'Take us to the guys, quick!'

Giru was about to take us when someone came and kicked him to the wall. 'Giru!' Pan yelled as the little robot began to glitch.

If only I were able to move. I would've given this guy what for. That's when we were picked up again. 'What now?' I asked.

Trunks' POV

As we got inside the strange shine, I tried feeling for Max and the others but still had nothing. "I'm starting to get worried," Goku said as he flew with the Para brothers in hand. "Where are Pan and the others?"

"Max," I called out. "Where are you?"

"Callia," Goten said. "We're here."

"Lucy," Mirai said. "Come out."

We landed on the ground and saw that this man that appeared to be the boss looked at the Para brothers with anger. "What have you fools done?!" he asked with rage. "You led them right here!"

"Please be merciful Cardinal Muchie Muchie!" the Para's begged.

They didn't get mercy though. Instead, a beam came out of the large statue and turned the Para brothers into dolls! "What the?!" I asked with confusion.

"Didn't see that coming." Goten admitted.

Cardinal Muchie Muchie used the whip he had in his hand to grab the Para brothers and threw them into a small pot.

"Hey why'd you do that?" Goku asked. "They were on your side."

"So what?" Muchie Muchie answered. "Those fools will be of better use to the cause to revive Lord Luud."

"Lord Luud?" Mirai asked.

"Now if you fools want to live then hand over the dragon ball!" Muchie Muchie ordered.

"No way!" Goku told him and the rest of us nodded in agreement.

Muchie Muchie didn't like that answer and then attacked us. He grabbed Goten and me with his whip and smashed into a wall. Mirai and Goku then charged him but got shot at with two guns that Muchie Muchie had hidden under his cloak.

"Why don't you fight fair you cheater." Goku said.

Suddenly, the ground began to shake as something stomped its way into the room. We all looked to see that this large lion of some sorts was standing in front of us, ready to attack. It would've been frightening if he were strong but he wasn't in the slightest and Goten just blasted it into pieces, since it was a machine.

This caused a small explosion that took Cardinal Muchie Muchie with it. I thought the battle was over but boy was I wrong. Instead, the whip the Cardinal Muchie Muchie had turned into a person that was simply known as Muchie, meaning a whole new problem was at hand.

Me: Uh oh, now the guys have to face off against Muchie. Can they do it and save the girls? Find out next time readers and please comment and vote. Thank you!