Try my new story guys...

I know I didn't reply to any of the comments but that doesn't mean I don't read I do read...but it's not that easy for me to manage my classes and and giving updates... I atleast expect from you guys good response.

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It's been 4 days since Dhruv's behaviour...and he isn't changing it at all. Dhruv isn't coming home in the nights making everyone worried.

Abhimanyu tried to talk to him but no use whenever he did he only got back answers.

The other side Manan were happy with the time whatever they are getting.

It s afternoon and after having food they just decided to lay down and talk. Nandini was in his arms like always and they felt content to be into each others arms.

Nandini: Manik...

Manik: hmm...

Manik felt her hesitating to talk as he saw her fidgeting with his shirt button. He made her look at her and asked

Manik:kya hua? What's bothering you?

Nandini: wo... Manik can we go back?

She asked whispering to him making him surprise and shocked...

Manik:why? Don't you want to enjoy?

Nandini: aisa nahi hai Manik... it's just I am worried...

Manik: worried about what?

Nandini: Dhruv. 

Manik frowned listening her...though he too was worried about him.

Nandini: Manik that day I heard you... I know Dhruv is not just like your brother but also like your son... I know you are scared and I am also worried... I don't want him to be on wrong path.

Manik: Nandini..you don't need to...we will go after 3 days...

Nandini: Manik...for me my family is more important than this...we can always find a way to spend time right?

Manik bobbed his head...she held his hand and said

Nandini: let's go back... I don't know but I am feeling it's better to go back...

Manik: hmm fine...we will go back..

Saying this he pecked her forehead making her smile...he smiled looking at her face.

Manik: keep smiling like this...

She snuggled more into him...and unknowingly slept but Manik was awake...he looked at Nandini and remembered the conversation he was having with himself that day

2 days back

Manik: Dhruv I just hope he doesn't do anything wrong... I know him he isn't what he is... bhagwani ji please usko galat rah par mat jane dijiye...

But to his dismay he was heard by Nandini who came to call him and she knew how much Dhruv is important to him.

Back to today

Manik closed his eyes and he too slept obviously not before booking their tickets to fly back to Mumbai.

The other side Kartik was sitting in one of the cafe and thinking about Dhruv's behaviour.

Kartik's POV

Why are you behaving like this bhai? Why are you hurting Abhi bhai? You were never like this.

But why were you not with Allan...he toh was your best friend...

You are changing bhai. I just hope you don't get adict to anything. What if Manik bhai comes to know? He will surely kill him.

End of POV

He was so into his thoughts that his coffee also was getting cold over there on the table.

Naira who had come with her friends in the same cafe saw him and got angry remembering what he did with her. She dashed towards him and starting shouting at him.

Naira: so finally I met you...you idiot us din toh tum bach gaye...ab kaun bachayega...you are so irritating you know...agar meri behen tumhari bhabhi nahi hoti na toh I would...

She stopped as she saw him all lost... her friends also were surprised to see him like that. Naira moved closer to him and kept her hand on his shoulder bringing him out of his thoughts.

Kartik looked at her and said immediately knowing why she was hear

Kartik: Naira please aaj nahi...kisi aur din please...

Naira: what's wrong? Tum tension mein kyun ho?

Kartik stared at her for few minutes and looked away...

Kartik: kuch nahi...

Naira sat beside him and said

Naira: break up ho gaya hai kya?

Naira said chuckling making him glare at her and immediately respond

Kartik: I don't have a girlfriend samjhi.

Naira: toh yeh muh kyun phula rakha hai?

Kartik: kuch nahi...anyways I am leaving...

Saying this he got up and left Naira felt bad looking at hik going away but she knew something was off with him.

Naira: ise kya hua hai? Di ko bolu?bata hi deti hun...atleast she will check on him when she will come.

Saying this she messaged Nandini about Kartik and went to her friends and they had their time.

It was late night and Manan were at the airport boarding their flight.. Nandini had not checked her phone yet.

They entered the flight and settled themselves comfortably on their seats...they were told to fasten their seat belts and put off their phone.

Nandini was going to put off but she saw message from Naira and res it before putting it off.

Nandini's POV

I hope ghar pe sab thik ho. Kartik ko abhi call bhi nahi kar sakti. Ghar jaa ke hi pata lagana hoga.

End of POV

Manik: acha listen Nandini you can join the school from monday.

Nandini: haan maine joining letter bhej diya hai...so they told me to join from monday only.

Manik: thik hai...ab sab buzy ho jayenge...

Nandini smiled listening his tone... Manik looked at her and entwined their hands and kept it closer to his stomach.

Nandini leaned on his shoulder and kept her head on it. Manik pecked her head and they started their journey back to Mumbai.

It was late night still Dhruv isn't home. This is fourth time he is coming home late.

Abhimanyu was sitting on the sofa working on some presentation and waiting for Dhruv too.

Shanti maa saw him working and coming to him she said

Shanti maa: Abhi beta jaa ke so ja...bahut late ho gaya hai.

Abhi: nahi maa aap jao aap so jao...main hun yahan...

Shanti maa felt pitty for him as he has to suffer all the bullshits of Dhruv. At that time only Dhruv came slightly drunk.

Abhi: wahi ruk...

Dhruv: kya hai?

He asked irritatedly...making Abhimanyu angry

Abhi: yeh bhi koi vakt hai ghar aane ka? Hum kabse wait kar rahe hai tera.

Dhruv: maine bola kya tum logon ko wait karne ko.

Abhi: tu maar khayega Dhruv...

Dhruv: huh...aur kar bhi kya sakte ho aap log...

Saying this he left from there leaving Abhimanyu in tears..he was feeling so much pain looking at his younger brother talking like that.

Abhi: aao so jaiye maa...main bhi jaa raha hun.

Shanti maa: beta khana toh kha le...

Abhi: maan nahi hai maa...

Saying this he left from there to his room with his laptop and all.

Shanti maa: kya ho gaya hai Dhruv ko...bhagwan ji please sab thik kar do.

Saying this she left to her room that is provided by the Malhotra's. It was early in the morning around 5 when Manan reached home and without making noise they left to their room and directly went to sleep.They didn't want to disturb anyone so they went and slept.

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