So the top 9 is entry 1

Review of judge
Judge

I have divided the story into 7 phases.... the way u had mentioned.

1. Character understanding- Understanding mei i have given 4/4..... because the way RagSan had an understanding, that was really nice. I mean sanskar had not to do some extra efforts to make Ragini realize that she should not have run away. And should have definitely thought about her family and siblings.

2. Character's actions, emotions, dialogues- Here i have given 2/4..... because i guess sanskar's actions were a little justified... like in the starting i could feel how sanskar would be behaving. But how ragini reacted, what was her way of reacting, how she felt.... wasn't that much elaborated or i can say was not described to a level which the writer had marked in the beginning.

3. How did the character feel- 2/4.... because here too, the same reason, their feelings were not that much elaborated. Wasn't described how they fell in love. It was just written that with time they fell dor each other.

4. Describing the scene. Again 1/4...... because at places where the description was required, it wasn't justified well. Like at their wedding, the writer did not show Ragini's confusion ki how she felt when she saw AJAY at the place of Sanskar. But the way writer described how Ragini and sanskar met.... their conversation... and ofcourse the beginning was great... for that i have given 1 marks.

5. Title- I think the title was totally apt. Sanskar taught Ragini how to live.... how to take mature decisions. For that i have given 4/4..... because truly i felt it goes with the story.

Options- 2/4..... coz writer had mentioned sanskar's character as that if a celebrity. Bur i felt it wasn't a sought of a celebrity character. Though Ragini's character was that of an innocent girl. I guess sanskar could have been given an option of a social worker... coz writer had mentioned once that he was a social worker too.

7. Guest appearance- To be very frank, i was confused about this..... coz i think that was a quite unique idea of presenting urself in that style. Means she gave the pov herself. And the way guest appearance was required, it was that much only.... so i myself felt it unique idea. Still i have given 3/4. Coz she had not described well And the remaining two marks, i gave for the story's concept. According to me, the story was totally a different one. I mean being a ragsan reader, i have not read any such kinda story. So i have given the concept two marks

Scores
Jury
11+9+7+12=39
Judge
+20=59
And no votes
59/100