Top 6
Top 6 is Entry 4
Review of judge
As per the judging rule the character mentioned above has been used in this story ... "mr.perfect " "ms.imperfect "
The author used herself in this story as " wedding planner " Title of the story there
Neil,I didn't believe in relationships until I met you - it was the only dialogue i felt best
Story line is abt how mr.perfect changing ms.imperfect to ms.perfect by his love I felt author role is very less in it Mutual understanding was there ...shared abt positive thoughts abt life good concept
but i felt aveneil sceens were less like chemistry too All over story is good...
Judge grade 20/30
Jury
12.5+11+7+12.5=43
Judge
+20=63
Votings
+10=73
Guess the top 5....
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