Top 5 is entry 2

Review:

A cute romance which tells of the love between two celebrities: A newly sucessful actress and a reigning superstar.

In this story, Abhi is portrayed as the classic hero: bows down to the wishes of his Dadi...gets jealous when his girl gets friendly with another guy, especially a flirtatious one...and he is old-fashioned and thoughtful enough to ask for her hand in marriage from her brothers, while Pragya is portrayed as a cute, sweet, kind-hearted soul, who has a crazy crush on her superstar idol. 

Their story begins when Superstar Abhi decides to rope in Pragya to play the role of heroine in his new film at the behest of his Dadi. Abhi can't understand why she wants this girl in the film, but still does as she says because he loves his Dadi. Later we get to know the reson for this, which was really heart-warming.

The scenes between Abhi and Pragya are cute and romantic. Through the author's words we can actually feel the chemistry/love between these two. 

Speaking of the author, her character "Fara" was really superb! She was sweet, funny and just downright lovable! I think we all have a friend like that...or maybe we are that friend! The scene where she makes Pragya blurt of her feelings in front of Abhi and then ran away was awesome, as was her interactions with the Aroro family.

Aroro brothers, Purab and Arjun, might be powerful and arrogant business tycoons, with the world at their feet, but it's clear to us that they are just big softies when it comes to their little sister, Pragya. Even the servants are surprised by their behaviour! The sibling bond that Arjun, Purab and Pragya share is really adorable. They want the best for their choti, even if means interrogating the man she loves!

The author has managed to create a wonderful story with a few added layers in between that we can’t help but love! Good job, "Fara"!

Judging Points

-As per the judging rules:

* The Character Options mentioned above has been used in the story.

*The Author has written herself into the story as the Character "Fara".
 

- Grammatical errors aside, the storyline was sweet and funny and the characters shared good chemistry.

-Chemistry between hero and heroine was awesome. Readers can actually feel the love/emotions between them.

- Scenes were appropriate and enjoyable and super- cute, although more could have been added in, for example, where were the Aroro's siblings parents...or the rest of Abhi's family? A bit more of a backstory to the characters would have helped in understanding the characters a bit more.
 

- Both Flashbacks were awesome as was the scene where Abhi got hurt and the scenes with Fara.

- More descriptions/details were needed in the story.

- Thoughts and emotions were there but were lacking in some scenes.

-Dialogues were plain, but good.

-Writing style was average

All in all the story was enjoyable!

Judge's Grade: 22/30

 
Scores
Jury
13+12+12+14=51
Judges + voting
+22=73+4=77