Top 4 is entry 5

As per the judging rule
the character mentioned above has been used in this story ... "Social worker... "
The author used herself in this story as " sad" Title of the story there
Laksh; don't know y ur name is Sad it should be Happy! Keeps other's always happy! - it was the best dialogue i go through in that...
Story line is good she took an good concept abt orphanage nd life of kids social awarness is there ...lengthly one puts more effort in it...but i felt love scene between raglak is less ... Chemistry medium ... Kids admires most in that story...
character wise both laksh nd sad having equal place ...their role slaying in it... Sad an best supporting role in it..
I felt she can add some more raglak moments... All over story is good...
Judge grade 23/30

Scores

Judges
12+13+12+13.5=50.5
Jury
+23=73.5
Vote
+4=77.5