Jury 2

The one shot was cute and well written.  But the writer could have elaborated the plot more,  like showing abhigya's scene and their proposal could have been more interesting. The plot was good but lacked entertainment. The title was perfect and fascinated me!!! An eye catching title!!!! Even the ending i feel could have been more interesting.

Regarding the characters,  the writer didn't mention the options he/she chose as well as the special entry of the writer itself is unidentified.

Jury 3

Cute story....

Character description were nice but it could have been better....

The options author choose i think it's not that up to the mark.....

Scene description could have been better...

Author involvement was nice....

But i think author could have described the character more better

All and all a nice attempt...

I will score it 5/10

Best scene:

 The first time abhigya meet on ride....

Best dialogue:

I don't know it was dialogue or not but the in starting the lines were very nice.....

🍂Everyone says that life is a race...!!!!but in that race according to me two things are considered as a destination of our winning point...

🍂1) finding a perfect soul for our life as a partner without knowing their background

🍂2)achieving something like imprinting our foot in this world even after our death are the destination........

Jury 4

It was a nice and simple OS. I liked the descriptions mentioned in the beginning even before the start of the OS and most of them for me were proved in the OS.

The title of the OS was really a unique and eye catchy one. And it was indeed apt for the story and it was properly justified and conveyed. The chosen options were mentioned in the beginning, but for me Abhi’s character option was more justified than Pragya’s. Pragya’s character option of Papa’s princess was only justified in the second half, last portion but Abhi’s was there thorough out the story. It was half of Ms.Innocent n Papa’s princess for Pragya.

Character understanding was there. That was proved from both the ride scenes and the scenes at the end where Pragya defends Abhi. All the emotions and feelings of both Abhi n Pragya were properly justified and conveyed. Their feelings while being away from each other and the restlessness to meet each other was very well described. Their reactions on finally meeting each other and then their confession was really a beautiful scene n i loved it a lot. That scene was my favourite. Their first ride together n then their ride when they met again were amazingly described, loved it. Dialogues were nice but could have been better.

One drawback of the story was that, the concept was really nice n interesting but it was not tat utilised. The descriptions of the scenes mentioned in the story were very well mentioned but more scenes n descriptions regarding some other things could have been added n in a way was needed, like who is Ragini to Abhi, about Abhi n Purab’s family (a little more background of them), more elaboration on last scenes; how parents agreed, how was Abhi saved n all....Pragya’s reaction on knowing about Abhi’s wedding n also about his suicide was well justified, but her reaction when she met Abhi at the hospital was needed and also in Abhi’s case, how he felt when he came to know about his n Fara’s wedding and what lead him to commit suicide n all were needed, their emotional reunion or something at the hospital....descriptions on all those were needed. 

There were many scenes which with more descriptions could have been made really amazing and the OS with some more addition of certain scenes could have been made much more better n superb.

The guest apeaof the author as Fara was justified, although a little more description on how she become the cupid for Abhi n Pragya at the end would have been really good.