Jury 2

Beautiful, it was so beautiful one shot. The plot made me speechless!!!! Amazing plot. Everything was perfect. The way Ragini's character was portrayed was so beautiful. And I love the way Sanskar tackled the situation on the first night. Shafeen charcter was interesting one. Like I expected her to be villan but her turn over was something least expected. Then even Suhana was very understanding. I loved the scene where coffee fells on the files. From there their love started. I even loved Ragini's proposal and the way she used to feel the music.  The title was perfect.  Awesome work.

Jury 3

Fabulous story.....

Character description was awesome.....the way she shows sanskar character as celebrity and ragini's innocence everything was just waw.....

The supporting character was really nice and there was as needed...author didn't drag it much.....

I love the way she shows the bond between ragini and sanskar's siblings......

Concept was amazing.....and title really suits it.........

I like the way author was involved in this her character was awesome and as per requirement.....

There were soo many waw moments in this.....

Best scene:

For me there were two one is when ragini climbs the mango tree and there water fight then proposal the way he expressed his love in front of all its awesome and there is special scene for me which really brings smile on my face that was when he makes her feel music that was amazing....

All and all amazing story 

Best dialogue:

Ragini smiles and kneels infront of him and signs:if i get your one look.. I dont need see any other thing then your eyes

If i get your smile.. I dont need any flowers 

If you hug me.. I dont want the other place then that

If you are my love.. You are my everything

YOU ARE THE BEAT(she nods in no) MUSIC OF MY HEART

YOU ARE THE MUSIC OF MY HEART

I LOVE YOU... 

Jury 4

This OS left me speechless. It was absolutely amazing and I really loved and enjoyed reading it. This was the best OS for me, a perfect mix of all the elements.

The choosen options were mentioned and there were very well justified, although more of Ragini’s than Sanskar’s. I really loved Ragini’s character, she was indeed innocent and bubbly. The title was perfect and apt for the story n loved how the way the author portrayed it in the OS.

There was indeed a mutual understanding between Sanskar and Ragini. How without even Sanskar voicing out or even better writing many things, Ragini understood them and the way Sanskar understood Ragini even without knowing the sign language proves the understanding they have. 

Ragini’s emotions, feelings and actions were well conveyed and justified. How she faces everyday with a smile on her face, how she jelled up with Shafeen n Sameer n all the other scenes were well described. A little bit more description on her feelings were needed, although the ones already described are good but still a little more would have made it better. Ragini’s reaction to the proposal was surprising coz usually thats not the case. Mostly they chose to stay single for life for their loved ones but here it was different and that was amazing.

Sanskar’s emotions, feelings and actions were also properly conveyed and justified. His pain on losing  Suhana, his respect towards his guru ji, how he sacrifices for his guru ji n all the other scenes especially how he behaves with Ragini....were well described. Sanskar’s reaction or behaviour towards Ragini was also a little surprising, coz usually they would be cold n rude or will just ignore them but again here it was different and that was again amazing. How he admired Ragini was really cute.

I really loved Shafeen n Sameer’s character a lot. Their bonding with Ragini was beautiful n i loved it. My favourite scenes were Ragini for first time feeling music and then Sanskar’s public confession and Ragini’s proposal...those three scenes were absolutely beautiful n the narration made it magical. I especially loved the second half of the portion, from the point where Ragini’s sees Sanskar n Suhana’s photos and cards, from there till the end, it was absolutely amazing.

Author’s guest appearance was amazing. Her character was completely and beautifully justified. It was properly used. There were grammatical errors but thise were ignorable and the writing style was good. Almost all of the criterias were justified except for a little more description on their feelings, especially Ragini’s.