Jury 1

Dialogues 

Really perfect dialogues and the timing of their delivery was bang on target. 

Introduction 

This is the one and only part which lacks in this story

Title and option 

As per the described title and options story was described and poised mesmerizingly. 

Scenes 

Just astonishing, I mean the scenes were simply perfect.

Authors involvement

A very feasible character was used by the author in order to introduce herself in the story. 

I loved it. 

Jury 2

AMAZING!!!!!!  This one shot was damn amazing. A package of entertainment. Love all the characters specially Swara's!!!  Ohhh god this os was such a fun read. Love the way writer included herself as a character in the os.  Erica's character was so cute, specially her entry!!  Amazing. Swasan nokh jokhs were so cute and fun to read.  

I also loved the unique idea of Swara's birthday. That was least expected and came as a cute sudden shock!!!!  And the last teasing session was just awesome. In short the smile wasn't leaving my lips while i was reading the story. 

Jury 3

Amazing story and concept.....character description was so good the way she shows the perfection of sanskar and imperfection of swara.....and their love its amazing....swasan scenes were very nice......the way she shows their love and bonding its awesome....

Author involvement was also good....

Best scene:

The raita fight....where swara fall the raita on sanskar and their fight was really cute....

Best dialogue:

Sanskaar : ( Wiping Swara's Tears ) How could U Even Think that I would Forget My Lovely Wife's. Birthday? No Never..I would Prefer to Forget Mins Instead.. but not Urs Swara.. It's the Day which I will Cherish My Entire Life...Coz it's not just Ur Birthday but Also the Birth Date of Our Relationship... it's the Day where this Mr Perfect Met His Miss Imperfect  for the Very First Time..So Wishing Our Relationship also a Happiest Birthday Jaan...( Smiling Happily n Kisses Swara's Forehead ) 

Jury 4

This OS was a sweet n cute love story of our heavenly couple Swasan. I really loved reading it. The OS itdelf was radiating happiness.

The title was apt and perfect for the story. They were indeed unpredictable in the story or u can say coz of their nature, they are unpredictable. The chosen options were mentioned and they were completely and perfectly justified. Swara’s imperfectness and Sanskar’s perfectness is in a way a small base of their relationship. I really loved their banter n cute bickerings.

There was indeed mutual understanding between the two. At times of Swara messing up the kitchen n other scenes of them reflected the same. And without their this understanding, they wouldn’t have been able to come this far in their relationship of marriage, 3 yrs, with Sanskar being disciplined whatsoever n perfect and Swara being the epitome of imperfectness.

Sanskar’s jealousy was well described and his reaction at the table when the kheer spoled his files were a little unexpected. His naughtiness, his anger, his love, his care, all were very well described.

Swara’s naughtiness in irritating Sanskar was really cute. Then her guilt for spoiling Sanskar’s hardwork and her feelings were well explained.

From the beginning of the OS, many scenes with proper descriptions were given to show their nature and how the other copes up or tolerates or in better words sort of enjoy living with it. Then Sanskar’s naughtiness And Swara’s shyness and their love for each other was shown. And at last his outburst and Swara’s tears and then how he suprisingly surprised her, not in the usual maner that he does as mentionesd. I really loved how Sanksar surprised Swara, especially those poetry lines, they were touchy.

The OS was really sweet, too sweet maybe but in a good way. More than the first half i loved the second half. All the emotions were there in that particular portion for me. The dialogues were all good n sort of on the spot, like the perfect replies or something. The explanation of the way the dialogues were said gave the opportunity to actually picture which made reading it more enjoyable.

The gueast appearance of the author as Erica was very nice. Her character was well portrayed and properly justified. How caring she was with Swasan and how much she loved them were described in many scenes with her.

A couple of grammatical errors were there but they were pretty much ignorable. A little bit of family background on Swasan was needed. About their parents and all, not a lengthy or detailed one, considering they didn’t have a pert in the OS, except for Sanskar’s sister but still mentioning it would have been good.

This OS was different from all the other ones, yet there was something missing in it. I don’t exactly know what it is or where it is but i felt something was missing, might be a major or a minor element but something was not there coz of which i felt an incompleteness.