Jury 1

I think the story was good but the essence was lacking, it constituted a lot of humour, romance and good content but the description wasn't that great. 

Jury 2

Well an amazing and cuteness filled story!!!!  A bliss to read.  I am in love with the character of Sad, a lil girl with so many shades!!!  I even love the way Laksh didn't bend towards Ragini's money at first. Then Ragini's past effecting her present was well justified. The writer has beautifully made herself a character,  a main character, Sad if I am not wrong. Now coming to the title,  I feel the title wasnt suiting the plot.  Like " Love is a chance" wasn't fitting anywhere in the story. A cute story! Great work! 

Jury 3

Concept is very nice and unique....the character options were described really well...laksh as social worker and ragini as ms.arrogant....

But the way of writing could have been better....there were soo many mistakes , confusion and because of that the story was loosing it's charm.....and the way author's involvement was nice.....she described her character really well.....

Best scene:

Ragini and laksh's confrontation and love confession...the ladder scene was nice....

Author could have write it better because concept was really good.....

Best dialogue:

Laksh I know the love of the kids has changed u. N ur love for the kids has changed me!

Jury 4

First of all, this story was amazingly amazing one. I really loved it. The options choosen and the character of the author was not mentioned in the beginning nor in the end but after reading the OS, I figured ‘Sad’ is the role of the author and Mr.Social worker for Laksh and Ms.Arrogant for Ragini. The opening of the OS was really a good and different one. And in the opening the options chosen n the role of author was mentioned through narration and if that was the way the author had chosen to mention about the option and her role, then it is indeed an innovative and pretty thoughtful idea, an idea which wasn’t there in any of the other OS’s, till now.

The title of the story was really apt for the story and the perfect one, and it was completely and properly justified. Scenes of Laksh’s change after his accident, the kids and the old man’s love that changed him and then how Ragini also changed after coming to know about Laksh and his struggles and determination were the perfect scenes that justified the title. 

There was indeed an understanding between both the leads. How Laksh understood Ragini’s change of mind although he did doubt her in the beginning and how Ragini understood Laksh after knowing his past, understood how like her his is also in need or u can say was in need of love. And their this understanding is further proved at the success of the charity party.

Emotions and feelings of Ragini was very well described. Her reaction on knowing her brother’s illness in the past, her reaction on realising who Laksh actually is and why or rather how he changed and all the emotions and feelings she felt during those times, her admiration for Laksh were all very well described. Her transformation from the loving girl she was to the cold hearted woman and then again back to that loving girl/lady was very well described. But the ending scene where she told Laksh the reason of her disappearance for a while was not completely justified for me, what i meant is the reason (the burden part and the real reason for holding the charity party), i felt like there is something more to it or there could have been something more to it.

In case of Laksh, his love for the kids and his determination to buy the property was properly justified with descriptions. His sadness and anger on seeing the condition of the kids as well as sometimes his helplessness was also properly described. Description of Laksh’s thoughts regarding Ragini’s change of mind or after knowing her past was needed, though it was just mentioned, but more description was needed. His gesture of holding her hands while giving the speech at the party did covered the lack of description although it was just a small gesture and I really loved that particular scene.

The twists in the story were really interesting ones...Laksh’s talk with Suraj just increased the respect towards him and I really loved that scene, then Ragini’s past, the accident of Laksh that changed him...all those were really good. What was Durgaprasad and Shekar’s reaction to their childrean involving themselves in the charity works leaving behind their huge businesses was needed, their reaction about Raglak’s marriage although i think they won’t have a problem with it and what was or how was Raglak’s life after their confession scene (more description is what i meant).

The guest appearance of the author as the character ‘Sad’ was absolutely amazing. The perfect jolly tadka to the story. Her naughtiness and bubliness and her banter with Laksh was a highlight of the OS. The guest appearance was very well justified and properly used. The ending of the OS was a good one although a little more description would have been really good.

No grammatical errors at all (not that i have noticed), and also one major or minor drawback of the story was the dialogue transitions from one person to another. At couple of places after reading a dialogue, we had to read the next three to four lines to actually understand who said it and one or two times it was okay but after a point it was a little disturbing.