Jury 1

The concept of the story was exceptional and I was mesmerized reading it
The dialogues were awesome
Options, introduction and authors involvement was astonishing
Story was poised brilliantly and scenes were shaped up elegantly
All in all the story was the best among the rest which I have read till now

Jury 3

It was simple and sweet story.....

The character's description could have been better. ...there were no waw moments in story

The options author choose i find it unsuitable 

Means perfect and imperfect.....author should have shown more about character according to options like Neil's perfection and avni's imperfection.....but i found avni's character insecure and Neil's character calm and composed.....

Author was not involved much in this and she mentioned herself as wedding planner but this story ends on engagement.....so it's was not justified according to me.....

The story could have been more better..

Best scene: the ring exchange i like the setup.....

Best dialogue :

N:-Okay !Go ahead.But think about one thing.
A:-what?
N:-If not today ,you have to marry someone on some day .That means you have to give a chance to someone in your life.Why don't you give that chance to me?
Avni (to herself):-He is right.Maa is determined to get me married .I should tell neil the real reason behind my rejecting him
A:-Neil I don't want to marry you because I don't believe in relationships.If anyone is in your place,I would have tell him the same.

Jury 2

Its was beautiful!!! The whole plot was beautifully designed!!! The best part was the title!!! The title was perfect! Really loved the story. Even the use of song is appreciated. But the story lacked matter! The writer could have elaborated more about the avneil scenes. Also the writer's appearance wasnt much entertaining. The writer could have beem the cupid between avneil. And Avneil's pov could have been elaborated too! 

Jury 4

It was a nice OS, but it could have been made much more better. 

The starting of the OS was nice although it could have been more detailed. 

Firstly the title was pretty apt for the OS, n it was completely justified as well. Starting with Neela Maaks advice to Avni, their heart to heart talk and then Avni n Neil’s talk, how he made her understand that he is not like the other proposals that came for her and to give him a chance, how he understood her and at the end Avni pouring her feelings at their engagement...all of it were completely justified and was upto mark.

The options used were mentioned and it was also partially justified. Neil being Mr.Perfect was justified from his reaction when Avni told him to reject the proposal and Avni being Ms.Imperfect can only be considered from the fact that she doesn’t believe in relationships, doesn’t have faith in relationships. 

Neil understood Avni more than she did, given the fact that he had known her and had been following her from a month but from his response to the porposal, Avni did understand his intentions also as she had said at their engagement.

Description of what had happened in the span of 6 months that Avni was herself ready for the engagement was really needed because that was one parts of the crux of the story. What had Neil done for her, although according to the title sometimes words speaks louder than actions, but still description on how she had started believing in relationships was needed. Feelings and emotions they felt were mentioned or described at some places, like Avni’s at the beginning then during the engagement, but more of it could have been mentioned especially Neil’s. 

The appearance of the author was not justified. Except for just to welcome everyone at the engagement or to announce the surprise only, when the author’s character could have been more used, like during the engagement preparations etc. Lack of description of scenes was one major drawback in the story. If more scenes were there then the guest appearance of the author as well as some parts of the story could have been justified betterly. More description about both of their family, especially Neil’s parents. 

One thing that was very well justified was the bond of Avni n Neela maa, all of their scenes were up to mark. I liked the ending, it was a beautiful one.

No grammatical errors, not that i have noticed.