Jury 1

I feel story could have been slightly more challenging or interesting

Dialogues were good
Scenes were average
Options and the title was good
But indroduction of characters was somewhere or the other lacking

Jury 2
Well, the os was FLAWLESS!!!!  A really beautiful tale to read!!!  Amazingly written. Character description was well written, specifically I loved Abhi's description. The option chosen for the characters were justified. Grammar was too perfect to point out. Loved and enjoyed the plot to the core. I even appreciate the role of Pragya as a nurse! An extremely cute and innocent character. Then the writer, Farah was fitted amazingly in the plot. The title, my most favorite part of the entire one shot. The title was perfect. A really beautiful title i have came across with.  I even appreciate the writer for beautifuly justifying the title. Then the last paragraph was my favorite, that paragraph perfectly ended this mesmerising tale!  

My favorite dialogue was from his proposal" Pragya, you are the puzzle of my heart". Uhh that dialogue literally took my heart away. 

And my favorite character was the write it self, Fara. And i even loved the names she gave Abhi :-P.

A Beautiful One Shot! 

Jury 3

Awesome  work.....

The way author has described the abhi's character is amazing.....she gave a detail description about his character and the option Mr. ARROGANT it's perfectly fit to his character.....

It's also nice the way she shows pragya and her background.....and innocence shows in her actions and in her thinking.....

The bond between abhi and his loved ones is also up to the mark....

Concept was really nice....but I find lack of communication between abhigya....there could have been more better scenes....

I find lack of exprations between abhigya....no eyelock nothing.....

Starting was really nice but in middle it's loose the command.....

Author's guest appearance was nice but it was dragged little.....

All in all its was awesome but it's could have been better......

Best scene : the proposal

Best dialogue:

 Pragya you brought me out of the dark into the light, what am I am I saying - you are my

 ght, without you I am as good as nothing, in fact I am nothing, your my missing piece, the one who completes me, Pragya Arora, you are THE PUZZLE OF MY HEART

Jury 4

This story was really amazing with a semi intense storyline to it. How an innocent n sweet Pragya breaks the walls that the rude and arrogant Abhi has created around himself or even better around his heart and it was really interesting to read the same.

The options used were mentioned in the beginning; Mr.Arrogant for Abhi and Ms.Innocent for Pragya and both the options were propely justified, especially Abhi’s. His character description was wonderfully given, how he was n how he is now n a little glimpse of why he became like this, about his family n loved ones, were all mentioned in the beginning and it was indeed a good start. Everything needed to understand his character better was given in the description. But, for Pragya, although the description was given but more of it could have been there, like about her family and a little more about her too coz just the basics were mentioned. But, this was sort of covered up by some scenes in the story from which we could figure out her character, the one after she met Abhi n the one after 4 months where she has a talk with Fara. There was an understanding between both of them, actually more of Pragya than Abhi. She understood why he is being this cold and rude to everyone even when she knew nothing about him, and later due to this understanding between them, Abhi shared his past with her. 

The title was indeed a catchy one n it was apt for the story. The main crux of the story was how the empty feeling Abhi felt in his life, which he covered up with his rude and cold exterior, was filled by Pragya, how Pragya brings Abhi out of the shell that he has made around himself and a glimpse of all these can be understood from the title. Indeed Pragya was the missing puzzle of Abhi’s heart n the puzzle was solved when the missing puzzle was fitted, that is, Abhi and Pragya’s togetherness after Pragya broke all the walls he had created around his heart and this has been very well described through the story.

Abhi’s feelings regarding his life and more importantly what he thought he wanted in his life was very well mentioned. His conflicting feelings and emotions after Pragya’s entry in his life and how he felt with her around were described absolutely amazingly, especially her nursing to his wounds scene, the way his emotions n feelings at that time were described was really perfect. But, one drawback for me was that, Abhi’s thoughts and emotions when he was telling her the past was not mentioned and moreover him sharing his past with her was really abrupt u know. Although Pragya had been taking care of his grandma from last 4 months, their proper encounter was only when she nursed his wounds and then the next day he shares his past with her, that past which he refused to even acknowledge, that past that has affected his life so badly that he is a completely changed person now. Okay for a fact maybe he felt really comfortable with her so he did share coz at times it won’t take a lot of time for soem people to get comfortable with others, but his thoughts and feelings at that time was really needed but it wasn’t mentioned and coz of that, the scene was incomplete. More detail of his past was also needed, especially more description on his thoughts and feelings at that time. Mainly more description was needed, be it about the past or his feelings while telling about it or just before telling it, was because in the beginning the built up u have given about Abhi’s character and the sole reason of him being this rude and cold to everyone was his past, so the expectation when he finally shares it with Pragya and the emotions at that time n all were really at a high level and then later when it did happen, there was a sort of incompleteness to it, the scene was really abrupt n not that properly delivered.

Pragya’s feelings from the time she had met Abhi was really very well described, her wanting to help him out, her heart going out to his broken soul, when he is hurt she feeling the pain, her want to heal him, take care of him, bring out the real him etc etc were explained up to the mark. Pragya’s reaction when Abhi said told about his past was really nice, she handled it with love n care, was really soft to him, not that she was harsh before or something, but yeah. She unintentionally fell in love with him though hadn’t realised it then, but her feelings emotiond towards him or regarding him till then only says so. 

Abhi’s transformation to his old self after his talk with Pragya was very well explained was the proper step by step one.

All the exchange of dialogues were really good, be it between Abhi n Disha or Abhi n Pragya or Pragya  n Fara or Abhi n Sid. Speaking of Sid, his character was an amazing one, his support to Abhi and looking out for his best friend and taking care of him n all were really good. But, honestly I would have loved more of him actually, his appearance was there only in the beginning but later he wasn’t mentioned at all, especially considering the fact that he was mentioned in the cast description also. After Pragya officially became Abhi’s girlfriend, an appearance of Sid was really needed. Fara’s character was really a humurous/sweet one and author’s appearance as her was really good and properly justified.

All the scenes, except Abhi’s past confession to Pragya (which was i guess one of the main scenes), were very well described n proper description was there. I would have loved if some scenes of Abhi n Pragya were there before the grand proposal. Although it was mentioned but atleast one described scene would have been fine. Apart from these two things all the scenes, dialogues and descriptions were up to the mark. The ending, their confession and the proposal and all were really good and superb.

No grammatical errors, apart from one or two, but thats not much big of a deal.

The writing style was really a commentable one. The aurhor’s way if describing each n every scene, the dialogue delivery, the descriptions of emotions and feelings etc were really appreciatable. That itself gave a magical touch to the story.