Jury 1

Best scene

In car barking,

Abhi: Congratulation Pragya… 

Pragya: Thank you Abhishek sir..

Abhi: I am just 24 so you can call me by name not sir… Its look like I am getting old…

Pragya: Ok Abhishek… Still I can’t believe I am speaking to you only… someone pinches her while pragya shouts… (Who it will be don’t think its abhi… then… move further guys..)

Its not dream baby… 

Pragya: fara you devil… its paining… abhi smiles while seeing this…

Fara: sir even I am big fan of you more than her..

Pragya: no no its lie… he is my abhishek…. I only love him… fara smiles while abhi dumbstruck after hearing this… fara escapes from that place before she kill him after getting a deadly glare from pragya…

Pragya: thinks oh god pragya what you had done haan.. and says I am sorry sir I didn’t mean that way I mean to say even I am diehard fan you… but she freezes there while getting abhi’s answer…

Abhi: I wait for that day to became your abhishek… he says this in her ears and kisses her on cheeks then hits her forehead with him… Pragya didn’t respond but comes to sense when he leaves by giving a sudden peak on her lip…. 

Fara comes to that place where pragya standing by lost on somewhere… she shakes her…

Pragya: fara pinch me…

Fara: what..

Pragya: please do na… she does the same… 

Pragya thinks to herself while sitting on the car as its all true or am I dreaming…. She starts to blush while remembering the first kiss…

Here abhi Miss. Pragya Aroro I don’t like your name so be ready to change your name as Mrs. Pragya Abhishek Mehra…. 

Abhi smiles and says I am in love at first sight… Seriously pragya I may worked with many female actor but I didn’t attract with anyone even they try to impress me… Sure something is there that’s why I am fall at you in the first meet itself…

His thoughts are disturbed by his driver who remains him as we reached our mansion… Abhi smiles and enters inside to find his dadi who eagerly waiting for him in the doorstep…

According to me this was the best scene as it was really well described and briefened. 

Best character 

As per my opinion purab and arjun have to be that.

Best dialogue 

Abhi: Now pragya is my everything… At the first meet itself I can see my world in her eyes… Pragya may be matured but still she looks like a baby who gets angry for small thinks… Even we can easily pacify children but its so dough to pacify her… 

This has to be the best dialogue. 

The title was good and options were well mentioned. 

The involvement of the author was the best thing. It was really reasonable and best choice she took as. 

Remarks 

A really good story and all in all I personally I liked it but there are few things lacking like characters apart from abhigya and author aren't that much involved and there descriptions aren't given. 

Jury 3

It's awesome

The author involves her self very well the 

Way of writing. The way she shows the 

Bond between pragya and her brothers 

And abhi with her dadi it's amazing

Character description could have been 

Better and little lengthy 

All and all its awesome 

But she didn't mentioned the title 

Best scene and best dialogue:

Pragya: no no its lie… he is my abhishek…. I only love him… fara smiles while abhi dumbstruck after hearing this… fara escapes from that place before she kill him after getting a deadly glare from pragya…

Pragya: thinks oh god pragya what you had done haan.. and says I am sorry sir I didn’t mean that way I mean to say even I am diehard fan you… but she freezes there while getting abhi’s answer…

Abhi: I wait for that day to became your abhishek… he says this in her ears and kisses her on cheeks then hits her forehead with him…

Jury 2

The os was damn cute would be an understatement. While reading the os, smile wasn't leaving my lips. I never expected Abhi's move of kissing Pragya in the first meeting itself. That came as a sweet shock to me. Also I loved the possevesive Abhi. The writer had cutely taken up the role of being Pragya's PA. I really love the way how the writer had her guest appearance, a great move! Regarding the plot, it was cute as I previously mentioned. Their love story left me in awe!  The writer has correctly used the option she chose for her male and female protagonist. The title is good too but could have been something different. Over all the story was lovely! 

Jury 5

First of all, the OS was really amazing, though there were grammatical errors but I really really loved it. 

The title was really apt for the OS, and it was an eye catching one. The chosen options were also properly justified. Both of them being celebrity was made known at many instances of the OS and was very well utilised, though for Pragya the option of Miss.Innocent can also be used. I really loved her character more than Abhi’s, though I liked Abhi’s too, especially his naughtiness and playfulness, but Pragya’s a little more.

Character understanding; In case of Abhi, though he had made pre consumptions about Pragya even without meeting her, but after meeting without even she doing anything much he understood her, how her character is, that she is not like the other celebrities and why his Dadi was insisting him to make her the next heroin of his movie. In case of Pragya, without even meeting Abhi before, she knew he was different from the other celebrities and admired him for that fact as well, that can be known from her excitement when Fara told about her next movie. Apart from the leads, there was a mutual understanding within all the other characters as well.

Actions, emotions and the feelings of the character was well justified. Pragya’s excitement and nervousness on meeting her inspiration cum crush for the first time in her life was very well justified. Her feelings when Abhi got hurt was also very well conveyed, especially from her dialogues. Abhi’s feelings and thoughts before meeting Pragya and then later on after meeting her was also properly mentioned. And the love the two bhais and bhabhis had for their choti was well conveyed, especially the starting kitchen scene and their convo then and the last scene of their interview of Abhi covered it up. I actually enjoyed reading small glimpse of Abhi’s interview and would have loved to read more of it.

The change in his emotions before and after their meeting was not conveyed really well, though the writer tried to and also Pragya’s feelings and emotions on knowing about her movie trailer being a hit and then her feelings and inner turmoil at the thought of them not being able to meet since their shoot finished was not conveyed properly, although the writer has tried to convey. There was some sort incompleteness in these three scenes for me.

Descriptions of Abhi’s feelings before and after the meet and Pragya’s excitement on meeting her crush was justified. And some scenes during their shoot was also described to show their growing feelings for each other. And the beginning scene was well described, the love they had for their choti and both the brother’s protectiveness for her can be understood. But, Pragya’s response to her movie trailer being a hit was not properly described and in the last section of Abhi’s interview with Arjun and Purab, more description, like someting to make it a little more intense, would have made it better considering how protective both the brothers are of their choti, but still it was justified.

The guest appearance of the writer was very well justified and I really liked the character of Fara. She was this sweet bubbly girl and the perfect friend and PA for Pragya. Her appearance was properly justified and utilised. Really adored her character.

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