Final Race
So finally came up with the results..
We know we know you will skip this part... But still
Both are winner's for us
Here the final scores is out of 100+30
60 jury
30 fandom judge
10 votes
+30 is of abhigya judge
Votes:10 for both
Jury 1 shivank2001 :
Swasan :14/15
Ragsan :14.5/15
Jury 2 cute-devil
Swasan:15/15
Ragsan :15/15
Jury 3 saher344
Swasan :14/15
Ragsan :14.5/15
Jury 4 emananadeer8
Swasan:13.5/15
Ragsan:14.5/15
Swasan judge cindrella212 reviews and score
That was such an cute and sweet os. I really loved it. You have described each and everything so beautifully. Every emotions were described perfectly. The options which you choosed for characters was also justified i.e. Mr. Perfect (Sanskar) who wants everything to be perfect while on the other hand Mrs. Imperfect (Swara) who does one thing but spoils or damages many thing while doing one work. It was the case of opposite attracts. And you completely succeeded in perfectly portraying them according your options.
Some scenes were so funny yet cute like swara spiling the raita on Sanskar and then blaming him only for the mistake while poor Sanskar having no option but to chuck the topic. While Sanskar’s style of wishing her birthday was something new and unique which even shocked me.
The title which you have kept is also apt. It clearly described the story.
But I would like you to tell you that there are some small errors. Like sometimes sentence formation is not proper, you have made errors in it. And small negligible grammatical errors.
Well I would rate your story 29/30 . How I wished to give you full but can’t ignore your that small Mistake.
Judge score:29/30
Ragsan judge Diksha_chaudhary review
1. Character understanding- Understanding mei i have given 4/4..... because the story was all about understanding between the characters. And here i am not talking about RagSan only....... but all the characters which were in the story had that understanding with each other, be it Sanskar, Ragini, Shafeen, Sameer, Ap.... and even Suhana. Understanding was commendable i would say.
2. Character's actions, emotions and dialogues- Again 4/4....... emotions, dialogues, everything was perfect. One can easily connect to the emotions while reading it. All the scenes had a perfect blend of emotions which can somewhere make the reader's heart flutter with joy (seeing RagSan and others bonding), despair ( where Ragini explained Suhana that she must live with Sanskar and she'll go faraway leaving him), heart-touching ( how Sanskar proposed Ragini infront of the media...... and then the proposal of Ragini too), heart-breaking ( when Ragini got to know about Sanskar and Suhana's relation). Dialogues too were heart-touching.
3. How did the character feel- 3.5/4...... As i mentioned, the story can make anyone connect with it easily, but at some places, there was a little lack of explanation. Though, how all the characters felt was quite imagineable , but i guess there was a missing of proof reading, as some places had some mistakes........ there were some more autocorrection mistakes, i would say :)
4. Describing the scene- 3/4...... again, some scenes were more explainable, like where Sanskar and Sameer left Ragini's place after her dada ji's demise. It could have been described whether Ragini ignored Sanskar, or he tried to make up with her.
5. Title- Here i would give 4/4. I feel the title was totally apt YOU ARE THE MUSIC OF MY HEART. And this was justified in two scenes....... one, where Sanskar made her feel the music by placing her hands on the speakers and how she felt it.
And second, where Ragini proposed him. She mentioned that how he is MUSIC of his heart, rather than calling him its BEAT.
6. Options- 4/4...... because the options were clearly mentioned and were appropriately used in the story. Sanskar was a singer, and Ragini was really very innocent and cute.
7. Guest appearance- 3.5/4........ this character was perfectly well desscribed, and was an important character too. But it was more of a supporting role, than being a guest appearance. This all made a total marks of 26/28.
The remaining two marks are for the concept of story, where i have given 2/2...... because the concept was really nice. And the main thing, i personally wished the author not to make Ragini able to hear and speak at the end, because that would have made the story a common one....... i wanted Sanskar to love her the way she is. And again, Ragini became a working girl rather than crying over her disablilty. This is something that i feel is most important to be shown in any story.
Judge score:28/30
Swasan total:10+56.5+29=95.5/100
Ragsan total:10+58.5+28=96.5/100
the_naughty_princess review #strict judge😂
Swasan:
Entry 7 As per the judging rules:
* The Character Options mentioned above has been used in the story and extremely over-used in the dialogues...and became a little annoying after certain point.
*The Author has written herself into the story as the Character "Goldie Di". Her character was different. She was nice but not overly sweet, which was kind of refreshing. Even I was scared for Swara and Sanskaar when she made an appearance. Good thing they calmed her down in time lol. *Title is there and appropriate to story.
- Grammatical errors aside, the storyline was good and kept flowing. Descriptions were good although some of the words have been used over and over again....even in the same sentence.
- Scenes were really good, but more could have been added. The chemistry between Sanskaar and Swara was really superb...cute, funny, passionate and romantic.
-The story of how these two opposites met and married is seriously missing and it makes me feel like the story is lacking something without it.
-Descriptive thoughts were okay.
-Dialogues were good.
- Good writing skills.
Grade: 25/30
Ragsan:
Entry 8
* The Character Options mentioned above has been used in the story. Although there could have been more mention in the story about Sanskaar's Celebrity status.
*The Author has written herself into the story as the Character "Aliya". The author's character was different and likeable. I love the fact that she tried her best to get brother's love back to him, even though she liked Ragini alot. Her character was superbly thought out.
*Title is there and appropriate to story...and so sweet.
- Grammatical errors aside, the storyline was awesome and kept flowing, each scene better and more intriguing than the last.
-Descriptions were good, emotions were on point, characters were well written.
- Scenes were really sweet, emotional and just plain adorable. The chemistry between Sanskaar and Ragini was excellent. Love how the author took time to write through each scene.
-Descriptive feelings were good, but more could have been added to each character.
-Dialogues were really good, and Sanskaar's dialogues about his fans was really heartfelt.
- Good writing skills. This story is the best that I have read out of all so far! This story has alot of heart. Just for the storyline and scenes alone, I would have given full marks. But sadly, other requirements need to be taken into consideration also. Hats off to the author...this is just beautifully written.
Grade: 28/30
Entry 8 story was unbelievably the best story in this competition....by far...and ive never seen an episode of Swaragini in my life.
Best os according to...
the_naughty_princess
emananadeer8
saher344
cute-devil
Is none other than entry 8 i.e..You are the music of my heart by extremely fabulous writer aliya598
So final calculations
Grand Total of Swasan os:95.5+25=120.5/130
Ragsan os:96.5+28=124.5/130
So the winner is........conceptual writer expert.. Freakss ki official Shaan os writer.. Champion of the os writer..and woman of the series not to forget aliya won the highest categories in nominations awards And finally master blaster aliya598 🎆🎇🎉🎊 a big Congratulations!!
Congratulations again Aliya.. Seriously an heart touching story...
You are the music of my heart
And the Runner up is AngelGoldieReal... 🎆🎇🎉🎊
Congratulation Goldie.. A beautiful story
Love story of an unpredictable couple... U were no less.. But there was some place which found bit better in aliya
According to shivank2001 Love story of an unpredictable couple is the best os
So finally we came to an end😂
And after the interview's of the winner's judges and jury we are planning to end the crazy awards!
Had a great time with you all!
Thank you all the participants and active members of our family...!!
~freakss
F:fara
R:rhea
E:erica
A:anjum
K :karuna
S:Shafeen
S:Shruthi
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