Os avneil Kaalkaar
Requested by @jasminearun who wanted an Avneil FF based on the movie kaalkaar
Story:
Neil and Kabir arrive in Delhi from Australia for their vacation
Neil and Kabir take in the sights of Delhi
On a street corner, they hear a voice
Avni singing
Neele neele ambar par
chaand jab aaye
Pyaar barsaaye humko tarsaaye
Aisa koi saathi ho
Aisa koi premi ho
Pyaas dil ki bujha jaaye (x2)
Oh oonche oonche parvat jab choomte hain ambar ko
Pyaasa pyaasa ambar jab choomta hai saagar ko (x2)
Pyaar se Kasne ko baahon mein Basne ko
Dil mera lalchaaye koyi to aa jaaye
Aisa koi saathi ho aisa koi premi ho
Pyaas dil ki bujha jaaye
Neele neele ambar par
chaand jab aaye
Pyaar barsaaye humko tarsaaye
Oh thande thande jhonke jab baalon ko sehlayein
Tapti tapti kirnen jab gaalon ko chhoo jayein
Thande thande jhonke jab baalon ko sehlayein
Tapti tapti kirnen jab gaalon ko chhoo jayein
Saanson ki garmi ko haathon ki narmi ko
Mera mann tarsaaye koi to chhoo jhaaye
Aisa koi saathi ho aisa koi premi ho
Pyaas dil ki bujha jaaye
Neele neele ambar par chaand jab aaye
Pyaar barsaaye humko tarsaaye
Hey chham chham karta saawan boondon ke baan chalaaye
Satrangi barsaaton mein jab tan man bhiga jaaye
Chham chham karta saawan boondon ke baan chalaaye
Satrangi barsaaton mein jab tan man bhiga jaaye
Pyaar mein nahaane ko doob hi jaane ko
Dil mera tadpaaye khwaab jaga jaaye
Aisa koi saathi ho aisa koi premi ho
Pyaas dil ki bujha jaaye
Neele neele ambar par chaand jab aaye
Pyaar barsaaye humko tarsaaye
La la la..
{Neele Neele Ambar Par female version}
Neil is delighted: Omg mom I found your bahu
Kabir Shrugged: Eh
Neil angry: Bach ke Kabir tumhari bhabhi hai
Kabir : Mujhe Payal ki yaad arahi hai
Neil: I don't care
Avni finished singing
Neil walked up to her: Mein Neil Hoon
Avni: Okay so...?
Neil: You sing beautifully
Avni thought: Kahan se aate hai yeh ladke
Avni: Stop filrting with me I am a singer
Neil was confused : Flirting? Oh hello I was just praising you koi filrt nahi kar raha tha
Avni realized: Sorry I took my anger on you Neil
Neil smiled: No worries mein toh aapka fan bangaya
Avni: You see I aspired to be a big singer but due to my status I am stuck playing at street corners
Neil: Oh I'm
Avni: Don't finish that sentence Neil {she thought he was pittying her by saying sorry)
Neil reassuring her: No it's not like that I was going to say I'm a music producer my father Gautam left me his recording studio back in Austraila
Avni's thought: What a big coincedence? My new fan is a producer!!! Just play nice Avni he can take your career to the stars
Avni with a straight face : What about your father?
Neil: He died
Avni: I'm sorry for your
Neil: Don't finish that sentence {she was about to say loss he doesn't want her pity}
Avni thought: We will get along quite nicely
Avni smiled : Sure
Neil: Wait here
Neil went back to Kabir: Kabir I want to get to know her better so pls leave *puts his hands together*
Kabir: You know aunty will get mad if I leave you here alone Neil
Neil: Don't worry yaar I do have someone to show me around and keep me safe
Kabir: Kuch Kuch Hota Hai Haina? *smirks*
Neil nodded yes
Kabir left Avneil together for the remainder of vacation
Avni: Your friend is gone Neil let me show you the taj mahal
Neil (blushing): Haaye Avni this is the first time a girl is taking me someplace romantic
Avni also blushing: bus kar Neil
Avni thought: Why am I blushing? yeh kya hogaya mujhe? My heart has other plans but I just want to become a star everyone is going to be shouting my name avni avni avni!!!!
Neil yelled: Avni where you lost?
Avni got back in her senses: stop yelling neil i'm not lost anywhere here only
Neil: oh okayAvni: let's goAvni flagged down a rickshaw
{Taj Mahal}
Avni cutely: Neil did you know growing up I dreamed my future husband to make me something precious like Shah Jahan did for MumtazNeil: Koi baat nahi hum banalenge *smiles*Avni shakes her head: tum bhi na neil *smiles back*Neil thought: no joke avni one day you will be my wifeAvni: kahan kho gaye neil?Neil: I am not lost only admiring the beauty in front of meAvni blushing: who me?Neil: No the Taj MahalAvni blush went down in relization : ohNeil noticed her face change: avni kya hua meine kuch galat kaha?Avni thought: I want a career not relationship right now but my feelings are getting in the way of my dreamAvni: kuch nahiNeil: avni mujhe bhout bhook lagi yahan khaane nu kahan miluga
{Avni took Neil to a local restaurant}
Avni: dada *she ran towards the chef*
Ashish engulfing Avni in a hug : Avni tum inti late kyun aayi aur yeh kyon hai *pointing at neil*
Avni: Sorry dada woh thoda sa late hoagyi thi mein Neil nu taj mahal leke gayi thi
ASHISH: THODA SA? NAHI AVNI TUM BHOUT LATE HOGAYI TUMHARI SHIFT MEINE SONA NU DI HAI AUR TUMNE ISS NEIL NU TAJ MAHAL KYUN LEKE GAYI? NEIL EK TOURIST HAI?
Avni: Dada calm down aapki blood pressure high hojayegi
ASHISH GETS REALLY ANGRY: CALM DOWN WAH AVNI WAH TUM WAJAH HO MERI ISS HALAT KA SIRF TUM *HE LET GO OF AVNI SHE FELL ON THE GROUND* Meine Tumse Kaha Tha College Ke Baad Tum Restaurant Mein Kaum Karengi Lekin Nahiiii Tum Toh Singer Bana Chahti Thi Na!!! Singer Ban Gayi Woh Bhi Ek Sadak Ke Kone Par
Neil offered a hand which avni gladly took then faced ashish : sir aapki problem kya hai? Instead of supporting Avni, you are belittling her. *slow claps* wah glad to see indian parents mindet still hasn't changed
Avni signaled with her hand for Neil to stop
Neil shakes his head: Nahi Avni he has no right to talk to you like that
Avni :he is my dad neil he has the right to yell at me
Neil looking at ashish: no he doesn't have a right to yell in fact no parent has the right to yell at their children like that
Ashish: TUM HOTA KYON MUJHSE ISS TARAH BAAT KARNE KE LIYE? TUM EK TOURIST HAI AUR TOURIST BAN KE RAAHO SAMJHE
Neil engulfs Avni in a hug: Avni ka pathi lag raha hoon Tumhara damad
Ashish shocked turn to avni: yeh kya mazak kar raha hai? kamaal hai mein yahan kaam karaha mere paarivaar ke liye aur tum ne bhaagakar shaadi kar lee wah avni wah badhai ho *starts clapping*
Avni whimpering: dada
Ashish turns away from avni
Neil: let's go avni
Avni bitterly: dada ek din tumhari yeh beti star ban jaegee yeh vaada hai aapse Mr.Ashish restaurant cook rahin na mera naam hai Avni Neil ...? *she looks up at neil to say his last name
Neil: ...Khurana
Avni: Avni Neil Khurana
Neil: Avneil Khurana for short
Avni stares at neil Neil smiles
Neil: chaliye wifey
Avni: chalo
{outside}
Neil: where shall we go wifey? lead the way
Avni: um neil you do know that we aren't married right?
Neil : I know
Neil thought: one day we will be avneil khurana
Avni thought: should I ask him now about signing me on in his recording studio?
Avni turned towards Neil
Avni: um Neil remember when you told me about your father's recording studio?
Neil: yeah and?
Avni : and you are a producer right?
Neil realization: right oh mrs.avni you want me to sign you on haina
Avni: yes
Neil: yes pehle mujhe shaadi karogi?
Avni turned in shock: shaadi kyun Neil hum ek doorse se aache se jaante nahi and we don't love each other all I want in this lifetime is to be a singer not to be tied as someone's wife
Neil: I don't know about your feelings Avni but I love you tum meri zinadgi ban gayi all I want is to marry you today nothing more in return ...
Avni: ...in return you make me a singer?
Neil: yes
Avni: I accept Neil Khurana and how are we going to get married?
Neil: court marriage that way you won't have to fake being in love with me soon to be avneil Khurana
5 years later in Australia
Neil was in a coma after a speeding car had hit him.
Dr.Jha told Swetha, Kabir, & Payal his surviving chances were low he wasn't responding to any of them. The only one who could save him was ...?
Meanwhile in London
Avni rather quickly became a rising star she was on her london tour experiencing places she never would have dreamt if it weren't for ...?
Back in Australia
Dr.Jha came out of Neil's room
Swetha went to the doctor pleading: Doctor Jha when will my son come out of the coma?
Dr.Jha motioned PaBir( KabirPayal) to take her away from him
Dr.Jha: sorry his condition is still the same I feel it's time to pull the plug
Swetha's eyes got wide: No Dr.Jha this can't happen there has to be something you haven't tried
Dr. Jha looked at her: sorry but my hands are tied we need to make room for another patient
Saying this Dr.Jha exited
Kabir muttered: this is all my fault
Payal and Swetha looked at him
Payal: don't think like that kabir
Kabir: No its true I shouldn't have left him alone that day if only I had stopped him from leaving he would not be here in that hospital bed he would be with ...?
PayHa(PayalSwetha): with who Kabir?
Kabir: with her his Avneil Khurana
Scene switches back to London
Avni came inside her apartment with bags
Her assistant Raj was sitting there on the sofa waiting for her
Raj looked up at her :Where were you Avni?
Avni: oh I shopped till i eventually dropped
Raj: Avni since you were busy touring i couldn't tell but 5 years ago I got a call from someone in Austraila some Neil Khurana is in a coma
Hearing this Avni dropped the bags and opened the door
Avni: sorry raj mujhe jana hoga austraila he's my ...?
Raj: he's your what? Who am I to you Avni I thought once you finish the tours you will be mine
Avni: I can't explain to you our relationship you won't understand. You are no one to me cause I am married. I am only Neil Khurana's wife he's the one who made me who I am today. Without him, in my life, I would have been forced to work in papa's restaurant.
Saying this Avni went out into the hallway closing the door behind her
Avni: I'm coming Neil
Scene switches to Austraila
{hospital}
PayHa(PayalSwetha) stunned: What? Neil fell in love? With who? Why didn't you or he tell us?
Kabir: Yes what I said was true Neil fell in love with someone in India and married her
PayHa(PayalSwetha) shocked: what who is she?
A voice behind them: Mein hoon Avneil Khurana
Revealed to be Avni
Swetha went to Avni: You are the one who married my son but where were you for the past 5 years? tumhari himmat kaise hui yahan aane ki!!! You don't deserve neil *she says spitting on avni*
Kabir held Swetha back and signaled avni to go inside Neil's room
{inside}
Avni broke out in tears seeing neil
Avni: I am sorry neil its taken me this long to come see you I wasn't a good wife to you but you have given me everything I dreamt of you are a good husband. You were the only person who believed in me and my passion for singing. I should have acted on my feelings for you when I had the chance. I love you Neil Khurana your Avneil Khurana
{Done}
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