Mitch Sanders⭐
Hi! Sorry for the late update😅 ( i got caught up in so many other thing's i almost completely forgot, please forgive me Pumpkinggg)
Hi this is a quick review if you want revisions or if you notice a mistake i made, correct me and I will read the character bio again for corrections. Hope you enjoy and learn from my review that's what my reviews are all about!😁😁😁
Mitch Sanders by PumpkingxAngel
Name: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 7/10
The name is simple and very American😁 although my only problem is that it's maybe too common and simple to be memorable, when I was titling your review I kept on forgetting what your characters full name was😅 that could just be me and my horrible memory😭
Appearance- ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 8/10
His appearance is nice and basic just how I like it🤗 although I would suggest the description to be a bit more descriptive maybe😅
Personality- ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10
I can definitely relate to mitch's struggles dealing with major depressive disorder 😥 it's sad but it adds to his character and gives the characters story more depth and complexity. Although his 'Strong' and 'Brave' personality traits to me kinda contradicts his true character to me at least but I could be wrong🤔 maybe in his character description say "He tries his best to be strong, mostly as a facade to hide his true feelings." Because he's brave but he isn't brave enough to express his true feelings nor is he strong enough to do so. Again I could be wrong 😅 I hope this helps💜
Interactions with other characters- ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 8/10
Although I understand his struggle, his personality and chemistry with other characters is quite confusing at times. I get the vibes that he's standoffish and has trust issues and my problem is that I really want mitch to express is true feelings to other's and get the help he needs so he doesn't have bad emotional outbursts especially in the beginning 😥☹
Do I enjoy your character- ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 8/10
I enjoyed being able to relate to mitch, but I do notice that there's a lot missing from mitch's description but most of all story. I'm not saying write an entire essay about your character😂 but maybe add a bit more so I can connect with your character more easily other than sharing the same mental illness 😉
Development throughout story- ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10
I'm glad mitch is at least trying and working on getting help towards the end when I was reading about him. He's a person in progress to finding and getting the help he deserves although I wish he got the help he needed a lot sooner especially with being an adult and having the freedom ( I don't know financially) to go to therapy and finally get help sooner. But there is a lot of development towards the end which is positive.☺️
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