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🙋🏻‍♂️🧑🏻 nothing_blah0

Character Description: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10

Super super descriptive and creative! It was a bit too much though. Keep things slightly more simple because the reader can forget after all those details.

Name: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5/10

There's creativity put into it but it's so forgettable and confusing, the nickname is basic but decent, but even then it's too much for most readers to keep up with.

Personality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐ 7/10

I'm sorry but the character traits for A seem so annoying and unnecessarily negative in the beginning, they abilities are too much and hard to keep up with. Although the relationship between B and Santiago is beautiful and A grows a lot from this but the beginning is wonky, I give A 7 stars for being unique and different.

Interactions with other characters: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 8/10

I sometimes get confused especially with A's negative personality traits but they does get along with B and Santiago well I'm assuming which is good, I believe A grows on other characters well but those negative personality traits get in the way. I give it a eight for effort and because I'm glad A can actually get along with at least a few people and help each other out.

Did I enjoy the character: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 7/10

I like the uniqueness of A and how A isn't exactly an all around stereotypical good character with good personality traits but I do wish they had more good personality traits that I could like, enjoy, and relate to, but when reading about the character it's like the character is so boastful and braggy and if there's one thing people hate most is someone who brags all the time about one's abilities. But I do like A's relationship with other close characters which I find sweet!

Growth throughout story: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐ 9/10

A is going through alot in the beginning and is kinda negative to me at first, but then A makes a good turnaround and shows that they can be a good character towards the ones they care about and help each other out in the end. It's a nice little story just make sure you fix the beginning because the beginning may put most people off.

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