Book : How my life changed / His life changer.

Author : maanvibhagat

Cover: The cover is not an eye catchy one. My perception is, it is either the dawn indicating the ray of hope or dusk showing the sadness of the story. Am I right?

Title: I'm confused about this. Why there are two different titles? 'How my changed' suits the story though.

Blurb: You have created an interesting one.

Plot&Subplot: The plot is a fresh one which involved emotions and friendship. I liked how there are small small subplots here and there.

Setting: You haven't given much idea about it. But if you try, this will improve the story appearance a lot.

Chapter titles: Going with numbers for chapters is a formal and fine one. If you want your readers to pay more attention, you can give them names. (This will also help for outlining during draft stage).

Characters development: You gained all my points here. The characters are complementing each other. And are natural, having flaws and their own quirks.

Character Arc: Since I can't discuss about the arc with just three chapters, I have read all the chapters. There are beautiful and reasonable changes in characters.

Conflict: The conflict, mainly mentioned in this story is her uninformed departure and the consequences. It is fitting. But does the consequences include his claustrophobia too?(Then how he locked up himself in the room when he has the fear to live in closed places)

Details & descriptions : You did justice to the descriptions part but you can do better in including details.

Dialogues: are fitting and suitable to situations.

Pacing: Pacing is perfect to the setting. The way you are narrating the story by keeping the flashbacks is very nice and creative. By not adding any mature scenes, giving more importance to the bonding instead, made it a sensible story. Keep it up.

Mood: I have read this story in one stretch. You can understand by that how much I related to this story myself. It brought positive vibes. Surely had a good reading.

Grammar & Vocabulary : This is the part where you are lacking. Seeing so many grammatical errors, can turn off the readers who are grammar nazis.

Special Points : I suggest that this story should be edited, because it deserved more reads.