My first review! I'm so happy to read and review your book amywills12. You are one of my Wattpad friend, I'm glad, I have.

So going to the review part.

Author : amywills12

Title: "My letters to the Stars"

Subtitle- 'Nothing is ever as it seems'

You have chosen some wonderful words for the Title and they are more apt too. The subtitle is simply awesome, I like the idea of subtitles.

Cover: The cover itself giving the vibes of a dark story. It matches the theme. But it's not giving much about the story inside. Both plus and minus. (See it on the top)

Blurb: Blurb is intriguing and dark. It pulled me into the story. It alerted me that it's not going to be a normal story of something smooth and lovely but a tragic one.

Plot&Subplot: It's an original plot and realistic one too. The plot is dealing with such a sensitive issue, you made it very convincing. Subplots are also there and adding these backstories make us more connected to the characters. You have maintained the whole mystery of what happened to her in past, giving little bits and getting to know about it eventually.

Setting: Setting is very appropriate. The high school theme gives many loose ends to develop the story.

Chapter titles: The chapter titles are equipped with mystery and hinting. Apt ones.

Characters development: I can say you are good at this. The characters are built with everything around us. They have quirks, flaws, habits and own body language. That's how it should be.

Character Arc: There's clear arc in every character, after going through something. The changes in the characters are depicted so naturally. I can understand the protagonist's fears, her personality and her actions. Derrick became my favorite. His character has many layers to explore in future.

Conflict: The conflict here is, in my opinion, her dealing with the consequences of the trauma she faces and it was portrayed in a considerate and relatable manner.

Details & descriptions : The details are in the required amount, didn't bore me and has my attention. The descriptions are just in the right amount to understand the basic setting and what's happening around.

Pacing: Moderate pace.

Mood: Gripping but melancholic.

Dialogues: The dialogues are sharp, funny and accurate. Just when we are going in for a conversation, you are keeping us hanging. It's okay but sometimes annoying, not giving us much details.

Grammar & Vocabulary : You take care of this perfectly. While reading, I didn't find any grammatical errors. You used good and unparalleled vocabulary.

Special Points : Proof reading is required.