Another creepypasta review for Foxshade05

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Alright, taking inspiration from songs is always a good idea.

Character information

I don't have any issues here and it seems pretty well planned out. The whole yin and yang concept is interesting but it'll go against normal character ideals since they'll contrast one another. The way you've done it doesn't show much contrast, which means that the trust isn't very present. When using a theme like this, I think it's okay to have some contrast as long as it is realistic. Idk if any of that made any kind of sense, but that's the best way I could phrase it.

Relationships

These are fine but make sure they shape the character and have an effect on everything that happens.

Backstory

Alright, so this is a pretty typical fan character. Once again, I don't recommend including "canon" creepypasta characters in ocs because it takes away creativity and is pretty cliche, but if that's what you want to do then go for it. The only other issue I have here is a couple of logical issues. How is it possible they don't realise she's pregnant even though she can go into labour? That is impossible unless she has another medical condition and a lot of research is necessary to portray something like that correctly. Also removing a kidney without any medical research or experience is impossible and incredibly dangerous, just like any surgery without knowledge. Finally, she would not be able to fight after being passed out, especially from blood loss with a wound, she would be incredibly weak.

Really here you just need to do research and figure out how things could work realistically.

Other

These are fine, I have nothing to say.

Stats

These stats are fine, I recommend changing one of them to be a one to balance out that five though.

Final thoughts
This character had some interesting concepts and could be a really good character. However, a lot of research and development is needed to make this character the best she can be.

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*