Another review for an original universe, this time by AuraHeart

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Oooooh sounds interesting. Make sure this is well explained if you ever write this piece.

Character information

I honestly don't have very much to say here because this is pretty well planned out. All I can really say you can add here is you could afford to give him more positive personality traits since his personality seems overwhelmingly negative.

Relationships

These are some really interesting relationships and they seem pretty well established. All I can say here is to develop them further and make sure that everything is presented in a way that displays the relationships to their fullest.

Backstory

Okay, this makes sense for his personality and his character as a whole. You just need to develop this further and build up upon it. If you do write this story, there will have to be more if a build up and everything will have to be better explained.

Other/stats

These stats are fine and balanced, I have nothing to day here.

Final thoughts
I really like this universe and concept. I'm sorry I haven't said much here but there's not much for me to say since most of this is pretty well done. All that's really needed is further development and building up on this character and his relationships. Otherwise, good job!

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*