Here is a review for zazalord

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Cool, already given my thoughts on this but I had to go back and find this because you gotta remember I have so many reviews in this book that you can't expect me to remember every character I look at.

Character information

Alright so most of this is fine though I suggest making his personality more detailed and adding more traits because all you really get from him is nice guy actor. Whilst I understand it's meant to come across as he isn't what he seems, you need to change the personality a bit so that feels more fitting.

Relationships

These work just add more detail to the relationship aspect and make sure these effect the characters and development.

Backstory

Holy Heck this is a lot. Alright let's break this down a bit. First, you seriously need to add more positive things in here. Everything that happens to this character seems negative and has a large effect. Everybody has at least a couple of good significant things happen to them.

Second, the wasp gang doesn't make a whole lot of sense. How were they formed? How is Lucas the best when at no point it says he has any training? How are they able to avoid the goddamn F.B.I? Do research into actual gang activities and how assassination groups work.

Also, him being this brutal murderer later on doesn't make sense. He's an actor but been described as a nice person that cares for everybody. At no point is the emotional impact of killing someone ever shown, never mind killing multiple people. So, research the states of guilt and effects of killing someone on normal people.

You also gotta work out the stuff with the powers and stuff and how he hasn't discovered them at a younger age but apart from that, this should be fine.

Other

Alright, whilst this slightly explains the guilt control, it still stands because that is a lot of emotion to hold up. Guilt is a horrible emotion and this power is limited, he needs to be effected by his actions.

Stats

These work but like a scar shouldn't effect how attractive someone is that much especially when it's just a knife scar that you specified earlier was faint.

Final thoughts
You have to really work on world building here, some stuff doesn't quite click together so it needs to flow a bit better in a way that functions with the characters. You also gotta smooth out some stuff with the character's personality and his actions since they contradict a bit, but apart form that he's pretty decent.

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*