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Spoof or No: No
Cat Name:Skyheart

I love the name, I read ahead and saw the clan is named Cloudclan. I think the prefix and suffix work well together. 9/10

Appearance:A white and Tan cat with yellow eyes,Skyheart a ears and tail is fluffy,Scars on her tail,Legs,and muzzle

I like that she's not perfect, that she has scars. I also like the coloring, though I would like to have seen more detail. Also, how did she get her name with this appearance? I like details about the fur length. I really like cats with short fur but long furred tails. 7/10

Personality:Shy,Smart,Caring,Dark,
Loyal
Special traits:Loyalty and Patience
Likes:Her kits and mate, Darkness, Oreo's humor, Stars
Dislikes:Being mean, light, Cats trying to mate with her, Fights, The sun

I think her personality is unique, as it should be. I'm not quite sure what to say, other than I'm not sure why she hates the sun and the light. 7/10

Clan:CloudClan(Fan made clan founded in Canada in the Southwest part and the leader StripeTail is sick and BrightTail takes over but he lead us to danger)

I like you gave me a clan back story. I love the name of the clan. The only problems I have is the leaders name is Stripetail instead of Stripestar and that the cat that takes over has the same Suffix. 9/10

Position:CloudClan
Age:38 moons
Mate:Oreo(kittypet):A black and white cat with Green eyes and Blue collar
Kits:
Dawnkit:A fluffy tan kitty with baby blue eyes and blood Stain on her fur (Alive)
Other family:
Father: ShadowShade- A Gary cat with light Bule eyes (Dead)
Mother: BreezeIce- A white cat with Gary eyes with fluffy fur
Sister: BlackFeather- A black cat with Green-ish eyes
Apprentice or Mentor:MoonPaw(Apprentice)

Where does she get the tan on her pelt from? Her parents are both gray and/or white. I really like all of the names and how her mate is/was a kittypet, that shows that she's sort of a rebel, finding love outside the clan. 9/10

General other:She a fighter
BackStory:She was with BlackFeather and cats bullied she calling them Bloodhowler,Unloved kits,Miss want to die.Me and BlackFeather learn to fight.  But cats bullied her. BlackFeather fighting spirit killed to cats one by one and her mom kick them out to CloudClan and they took them in and taught them how to fight and BlackFeather became a leader and Skyheart became a warrior of  CloudClan

I would have liked more back story, and what's there is a bit confusing. 8/10

The overall score is 49/70