This is Ginbellnekos OC DO NOT STEAL

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Name: Creamfur

I like the name. Its sort of basic though. Its actually like a combination of the names of my OC Ceader stripes parents (Berryfur and Creamtail) 3/5

Appearance: A tall, fluffy marbled cream Tom with a white belly, chest, paws, tail tip and green eyes. He has thin scars on his legs and a nicked right ear.

I like the appearance. I also like the nicked ear, it makes them more unique. 10/10

Personality: Kind, Charismatic (He is respected by most of the Clan), Bashful, Caring, Anxious, prefers not to fight and only does so as a last resort, terrible at lying, insecure about himself, loves his family deeply
Likes: Hunting, running, watching the rain, gathering sage, kits, minnows, gatherings
Dislikes: Fighting/Sparring, dishonest/hostile cats, amphibians, hot/dry weather, mud

Its good that he has flaws. I hope for an explanation about his disliking of amphibians. 9/10

Clan: MoorClan
Clan Description: It's one of those really big clans. Similar to WindClan, but all their dens are underground. So warriors and apprentices have individual dens with their sibling, friends, and mates. Only the warrior and apprentices dens are separate and in long hallways. All the dens are center around a clearing that's basically a common room. Their territory has more shrubs, small trees, and tall grass than a usual moor. Also mates take turns in the Nursery with their kits so each parent can raise the kits and have a relationship with them.

I like the idea of both parents spending time with the kits. The underground part is cool but I honestly would be terrified of a cave in. 4/5

Rank: Warrior/Nursery
Age: 49.7 Moons

The age and ranking make sense. +5/5 points

Mate: Tawnyshade- A tall, pretty, marbled dark cream she cat with light brown patches and and bronze-ish Amber eyes
Kits: Runningpaw- A tall, fluffy marbled cream she cat with a white neck, belly, paws, tail tip, and Green eyes
Brackenpaw- A tall, lean, fluffy marbled dark cream she cat with brown patches and amber eyes
Gorsepaw- A tall, fluffy, handsome Golden brown Tom with very faint ginger splashes and Green eyes
Ferretkit- A tall, lean, fluffy marbled light cream Tom with a white chest, paws, muzzle, tail tip, inner legs,  and and one amber, one blue eye
Mother: Rosebloom- A tall, beautiful, fluffy, thick furred marbled dark ginger she cat with large gray patches, a fluffy tail and dark amber eyes
Father: Lioncoat- A tall, large, fluffy, handsome marbled golden cream Tom with a white belly, neck, muzzle, paws, tabby ticks, a fluffy tail, and blue flecked Amber eyes
Sisters: Morningwind- A tall, fluffy, pretty marbled pale cream she cat with light gray patches and pale green eyes
Honeyface- A fluffy, thick furred, beautiful marbled dark golden she cat with light belly, a white neck, muzzle, paws, fluffy tail, and dark green eyes
Robinstorm- A tall, fluffy, pretty marbled light gray she cat with dark ginger patches, a fluffy tail and amber eyes
Brothers: Lightningfur- A tall, fluffy, handsome blonde (like human blonde color) Tom with fluffy fur that seems to always be on end. (it's spiky and stands up). He has a fluffy tail, and a darker back, lighter belly, face, legs and light amber eyes
Mentor: Sprucecoat- A tall, fluffy, lean, pretty light golden brown she cat with a darker ruff, paws, legs, back, fluffy tail and Green eyes
Apprentice: Finchpaw- A tall, fluffy, pretty creamy brown she cat with dull marbled ginger patches and yellow eyes

I like all of the names and descriptions. I'm glad he has a big family. 10/10

Other: He's also considering naming one of his kits (probably Brackenpaw) after his mentor by giving them the suffix 'Coat'.
Finchpaw is actually really good friends with Ferretkit now because of her mentor, and shares a den with him once he is apprenticed. She also might have a small crush on him (Creamfur ships it.)
Ferretkit, is very similar to his father's younger years, personality wise
His favorite color is Amber.
In the future Brackenpaw will name her daughter Minnowleap, after her father.

I don't understand how Minnowleap is named after Creamfur. But the rest of the information is good. 5/5

Backstory: As a kit he was never particular close with any of his siblings or the other kits. From a young age he had social anxiety and was always doubting if anyone really liked him. He and his two sisters, Honeypaw and Robinpaw were made apprentices, and he was given Sprucecoat as a Mentor for her similar build to his (They're both lean and fast; though she's a better fighter). He had an affectionate relationship with his mentor and saw her as a mother figure. As an apprentice he was naturally gifted at hunting, climbing, and running and further developed these skills with her. He also started to grow close with Sorrelpaw, who helped him work through a lot of his anxiety, and they almost became mates, but drifted apart when she became a Warrior and met and fell for Tansyclaw (A girl btw). Creampaw struggled with swimming and fighting most of all and wasn't named a warrior until he was seventeen moons; 3 moons after Sorrelfur. Eventually he fell in love with Tawnyshade and Creamfur remained good friends with Sorrelfur, and thanks her for teaching Him to open up to others. Him and Tawnyshade had 2 litters of kits. He'll never say, but he favors Brackenpaw best and she often goes to him for advice and they go on patrols together. He also got his first apprentice 2 moons before Ferretkit was apprenticed, so he was a little absent in Ferretkit's late kithood, though he made an effort to still spend time with him in the Nursery. Finchpaw is like a daughter to him.

18/20 because its sort of short. I like it though.

Sorry it took so long, I got distracted.

Your total is 64/70