Smallstripe

Name // Smallstripe

Ooh, I like that. Idk if it's just my opinion but yeah. I like it.

Gender // non-binary

Alright.

Age // thirty five moons at death

Ok! Not a super young one.

Clan // Plainclan. A clan stationed in a large field thats at the bottom of a mountain. The grass there is fairly tall and alot of cats dens are outside because the weather is rarely bad. On the days it is though, they all crowd in a cave that once belonged to a bear, so it's rather big. Cats have a preference to sleep outside though. The prey is rabbits, birds and mice. Sometimes there are squirrels, but Plainclan has few trees. There are fish in their lakes, but their only eaten if theres no other prey. Predators include huge birds that take kits, foxes and sometimes bears, though you'll see one once in a blue moon.

Thanks for the information! Seems like a cool clan, but I'm a bit confused about why the weather is almost always good. Is StarClan like... really nice to them or something?

Rank // kit >> apprentice >> medicine cat >> exiled rouge

 I have no idea why they would exile a med cat but I guess you'll explain.

Sexuality // asexual

Ace kitty.

Appearance // Smallstripe is a small and chubby feline with short but thick fur. They have brown fur; with darker stripes over their body. Their underside is a slightly lighter shade, and they have pale amber eyes. Their tail is long and thin; and they have average sized ears with few scars or marks littering their pelt. They smell of herbs, due to being in the medicine cat den often.

Thanks! You put a lot of detail. And it all makes sense.

Personality // Smallstripe has always been one to bite their tongue. They weren't ever good at standing up for themselves; and were too emotional. Not as in they were often crying; but more so that they took words to heart, and were the type to never forget what someone said. They took things too seriously at times; overthinking even the simplest things. Smallstripe was the master at holding grudges though, and if somecat hurt them; they wouldn't forget. Because they weren't good at physical confrontations, they often targeted cats from the sidelines; attacking the cats ego and dignity.

It was easy to do with the proper planning; and Smallstripe would take days to plan. They had always excelled in being logical and planning; something that cats admired them for. Another thing was that Smallstripe was empathetic, and never found it hard to take a walk in other cats paws; so figuring others out was never too hard. They were willing to lend a ear to clanmates who wanted to talk; or vent their emotions. Because of their projected gentle nature and rank, they were seen as gentle and forgiving. So, it was quite the shock when their truths were revealed.  

It's uh. Her personality was a bit confusing. At one moment you're saying that they're one to find clever ways to hurt someone and then you're saying they're compassionate and caring. Wouldn't they instead see their view and solve a problem peacefully? Especially if they had days to think about it?

Strengths // being logical, understanding others, planning and things related to healing 

Mmk. Matches her confusing personality.

Weaknesses // most things that required you to be active, like hunting and fighting.

Me as a cat.

  Running // 3/10  

Hunting // 4/10  

Swimming // 3/10  

Climbing // 5/10 

 Fighting // 4/10  

Sneaking // 7/10  

Wow, a weaker cat? I know they aren't like super young but they're not super old either. I feel like they should be better at more things? Unless they're disabled or just super lazy.

Accessories // none  

Sure makes sense.

Residence // the place of no stars aka Darkforest  

Alright.

Family // Littleleap(father) - a small brown tabby with yellow-green eyes. Several scars cover his pelt from fighting and such; and he has a long thin tail. Like Smallstripe; Littleleap is small. However; he's never been afraid to fight. Despite being small; Littleleap has stood up for himself; gaining the respect of his clanmates when he refused to back down. He's tried to get Smallstripe to do the same, though respects the fact that the other isn't the best at confrontation and instead looks out for him.  

Dapplefeather(mother) - A dark brown she cat with white spots all over her fur in varying sizes. She has a lean build; and medium sized tail, along with kind looking amber eyes. As a kit she was reckless and teasing, but has since matured to be more caring and calm. She usually tries to get Smallstripe to not do the things she did as a kit; while also trying to let him have fun despite her constant worries of parenting.

Leapingflower(sister) - a pale brown she cat with darker stripes. She has a white underbelly and a medium sized tail. Her eyes match her fathers; yellow-green but she has her mothers tall figure. Leapingflower wasn't very close with Smallstripe; finding them annoying because they couldn't stand up for themselves. She was a strong female who had her fathers snappy attitude; though it was a bit more bratty when she got older.  

Cool! I like their family! Names are good and make sense, personality, there is a lot of detail.

Friends // Sagefall - Their mentor. Sagefall was a large and bulky tom with an orange tabby coat and long fur. They had a thick and fluffy tail; aswell as green eyes. Sagefall's pelt is covered in scars aswell. Due to his large build and scars, cats see him as scary; though its mainly the younger ones. Smallstripe used to think he was scary aswell, though quickly learned that the other was kind, if not socially akward and not the best with talking to others. The two ended up getting along; and Smallstripe found comfort in the other.  

Cute. I like Sagefall. Though you didn't make it clear what he mentored them with. I mean, probably med cat but based off of the scars he seems more like a warrior.

Softkit-paw - A slender tom with a fluffy orange and white spotted pelt. Softkit was often teased for his feminine build; such as his wide green eyes and long thick tail, aswell as his slender and thin body and girly name. It resulted in him becoming self conscious at a young age; where Smallstripe befriended him and made it their mission to look after the other.

Cuteeeee. Softkit seems nice.

Enemies // Crowcall - a dark gray tom thats almost black. He has a white underbelly; one of his forelegs being fully white. He has a thick long tail; and large burly build. Since they were young; he used to bully Smallstripe. And because Smallstripe wasn't one for confrontation; he usually got away with it. He was the sort that found the things that made you different from others; and taunt you for it.  

Well. A bully. Should've guessed this was coming. I JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND! Why would Crowcall bully Smallstripe? Cause they'e small? Cause they're weak? I HAVE A PROBLEM WITH BULLIES IN GENRAL! WHY. THEY. NEVER. SEEM. TO. HAVE. A MOTIVE! EVEN IN REAL LIFE! Sorry. I got carried away.

Rainleaf - a pale gray she cat with a white undertone and darker gray markings. Her fur is long; and she has blue eyes. Rainleaf used to be Smallstripes friend when they were younger; but the two had a falling out when Smallstripe found out that she actually didn't like them. She was pretending to be friends with Smallstripe because she wanted to impress Leapingflower, who she had a crush on  

Oof. Ouch. Like. Wow. Used. I want Rainleaf to die.

Mate // none  

Kits // none  

Other important cats // no

No problem with that .

Backstory // When Smallstripe was born; they was small due to genetics.

Alright. 

And this resulted into teasing from the other kits; mainly Crowkit. 

Ohhhhhh. Okay that makes (sorta) sense. I guess Crowkit was just like: "I'm big! They're small! Let's be mean now!" Maybe he was just bored and found a chance to do something...?

Rainkit would often scold him despite not truly meaning it; as Smallkit found out later on. They often relied on either her or Leapingkit; otherwise they'd do nothing. And their mother; Dappledfeather would do her best to cheer Smallkit up, however it rarely worked. Smallkit became really closed off to others and throughout kithood; didn't make alot of friends due to distrust. 

Wow. A closed off kit??? Just because of one cat? Wouldn't anyone stop Crowkit? I mean, there's an entire clan.

 When they became apprentices; Smallkit wanted to be a medicine cat. And so; Sagefall mentored them. The two became close; Smallpaw looking up to Sagefall and seeing past his appearance. However; turns out Smallpaw wasn't the only one. Sagefall had been meeting up with a loner he had met and tended to; and the two became secret mates. Though when the loner had his kits; he was forced to bring her to the clan and admit everything. When the loner gave birth; there were alot of complications such as her being a first time mother aswell as stress and being somewhat underweight, so she had a single kit before sadly passing away. The kit was named Softkit; and Sagefall was heartbroken. He ended up retiring from medicine cat duties to raise his kit. Beforehead though; Smallpaw was given their medicine cat name: Smallstripe. Smallstripe did their duties as best as they could; getting to know Softkit when the kit would retreat in their den from bullies. Smallstripe made it their mission to look after them and be the friend they wished they had when they had been bullied. So, Smallstripe would slip in yarrow(herb that if eaten; makes a cat throw up) to the kits prey; causing them to vomit once they ate the prey. The queens thought the kits were sick; and Smallstripe decided that it was better for them to be in their den. There they pretended to give them herbs to make them feel better, but really caused them to get sicker and sicker until they died. However; Smallstripe pretended to feel bad; when in reality they could care less. Softkit would no longer be bullied; and that was the important thing. The kits were awful anyway; and awful kits make awful warriors. So therefore, they were doing what was best for the clan. At least, that was the way Smallstripe saw it. After dealing with Softkits tormentors; they moved on to their own. At this point; Rainkit, Leapingkit and Crowkit had become warriors. They hated them all; for obvious reasons. Rainleaf for lying; Leapingflower for never truly caring; and Crowcall for bullying. Similar to the kits; they poisoned the three until they too died.

Smallstripe felt a surge of power; their old tormentors dead. They began 'serving justice' as they called it; killing cats who were unfit to live or had done wrong in life. In total; they had killed more then ten cats before a slip up got them caught. They were put infront of the clan; and the leader gave them the chance to plead their case. Smallstripe however; admitted everything with a head held high since they were stuck in the delusion that they had done the right thing. Naturally; they were exiled. Because they had never trained to hunt or fight, it wasn't long before they became weak. Because they refused to starve to death; Smallstripe took their own life after finding a deathberry bush and eating one. They went to the dark forest for obvious reasons. (I made them up as I went; so I imagine their gonna stuck badly lol. Also, I wanted to make a evil cat who actually had a decent reason for killing others. Or at least, that was the plan)Reply

Ookay. I kind of like that. Very, interesting cat, love the evil ones.

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