Hi guys hope everyone is doing fine  , my college has started its a bit stressful and updates will be only once  for every 2 days   because your response is very low the views are increasing day by day but not the votes /comments  if you people dont like my story or my way of writing then story you can tell me i wont feel because its your right to judge a story but neither you people support it nor comment it so it will be very difficult for me also to update because unless you know your readers opinion  a writer can also never write a good story  hope you understand i  may be sounding rude guys so sorry for that  and if i hurt anyone iam personally very sorry i try to update when ever am free its not like that right am putting my story on hold or making you people wait for my update am just giving you a small target thats it i dont think it uses much energy to hit a star /tell your view 

todays update 

manik here will be in miserable condition in parking area of hospital cabir after seeing the news   moves towards his car then he gets a call and is  baffled by hearing the other persons words  he soon reaches the hospital and finds manik cryng his heart out in parking area by hiding himself 

c pov- oh god manik what did he do to himself,and here nandu  seeing her condition  i feel very bad for her ,would manik do like that to her for revenge? nooo noo manik cant do that i know him i should handle him first and then enquire about this matter  then he sees manik shivering badly he imedieatly kneels infront of him

c- manik manik manik  listen and hugs him 

m sobbing very badly- cabir i didnt kill her you know na mumma is angry with me say na cabir mein ne kuch nahi kiya

c cries-manik you didnt do anything i know that my bestfriend can never take anyones life,but you have to tell me that how did this happen 

m nods - i didnt do anything intensionally   

c shockingly - matlab were you behind all this

m shocked and shouts-no cabir no please trust   me

c- then how did this happen

m cryingly- cabir i took her to mall we shared very good moments she made me feel my heart  i just wanted to hurt her father so i planned to kidnap nandini  i thought i will enjoy her fathers miserable condition and then torture him and act like a hero and save her and would ask her father to marry her to me and this was my plan then i would use nandu and destroy him ,and to show that mukthi her place   for that i hired a man and also instructed him to not to cause any harm to her just bring her to me by using chloroform but i didnt knew that he will do like this i just want to kill him i know its my mistake that she is in danger no but i didnt mean to take her life cabir please trust me and cries hysterically.

cabir is here full shocked to know this information 

c- manik listen am telling you something imp '

m-no cabir am bloody killer i could not save mom that ay and today my mistake and sobs very hard 

c- no manik  you didnt kill her 

m- how can you say  i killed her i kiled her cabir 

cabir slaps him and shouts- you didnt kill her because the person whom you hired didnt do this nandu 

m shocked-what 

c -yes now listen to me carefully because tu ne jise hire kiya when he reached the restroom he found that the door was locked from inside so he thought that she might have gone to use the other restroom on  the other floor and after seeing the news  he got afarid because you told him not to harm her and he tried calling  you and you were busy in handling nandini and he called me and told everything 

m -what then who did this to her?

c- wahi toh we need to know,how is her condition then press kahan se aayi?

m guility-i called them 

c-what but why do you how they are accusing her 

m- i just wanted them to click some pics of us and as you know what is their nature and i messaged that mukthi so i can show her that game is in my hands 

c frustated- manik ,but nandu is she ok woh bata?

m starts crying -she is in danger cabir and falls on his knees 

cabir understands his misery and hugs him tightly 

done with this update guys next who is the devil will be known in next part which will be in next hours with mukthi's rage on manik 

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ignore the grammatical mistakes 

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