🎊Results: Fanfiction🎊

"Finally, the winners are announced and so are methods to improve!"

The long awaited results for the Fanfiction genre is here! Firstly, a huge round of applause and a namaste to the judges, TrishaKay11 and Radhika170 and for spending their valuable time to judge the entries! After several changes in the judges, only these two kind people volunteered to help. Thank you! Secondly, Ilakshi and I would like to thank all the participants who took part!

Please respect the decisions and reviews of the judges! Do NOT blame them and bully them. If news of such irresponsible behavior reaches our ears, you will be reported without a second thought.

Let's continue to the scores!

First Impressions: The Marauders by MissLacybee
Cover: 5/5
Title: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
Creativity: 4.5/5
Chapters: 8.5/10
Grammar: 5/5
Preciseness: 3/3
Character development: 2/2
Total: 37/40

It is an amazing book. Just a few facts aren't right (as far as I know). I mentioned it as it was written that the book is canon-based. Rest it is quite awesome. And the details sure are beautifully written.

Star Wars Episode IX: The Descendant of Evil (Novella) ✔ by CroodsGirl
Cover: 4.5/5
Title: 4.5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Creativity: 4.5/5
Chapters: 9/10
Grammar: 4.5/5
Preciseness: 3/3
Character Development: 1.5/2
Total: 36.5/40

The book is overall quite good. Especially the fact that the author gave an overview before starting the story is appreciable. There are just a few very small errors apart from them it's good. The descriptions are also quite good.

YADAVI: THE NAME OF YEARNING by dwarkaratna
Cover: 5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Creativity: 5/5
Chapters: 10/10
Grammar: 5/5
Preciseness: 3/3
Character Development: 2/2
Total: 40/40

So IDK what to say in review as the book is like perfect. I couldn't find even a single thing about which I can deduct marks. The chapters are so beautifully written. Every single detail is so lovely and the only thing I can complain about is that I can't leave reading it now.

Arranged (ToduBaku) by MarkerloveshisSun
Cover - 3.5/5
Title - 2.5/5
Blurb - 3.5/5
Creativity - 3.5/5
Chapters - 8/10
Grammar - 4.5/5
Preciseness - 2/3
Character Development - 1/2
Total: 28.5/40

ummm yeah so the pace of story can be slowed a bit as it feels rushed.
Apart from that the title doesn't really overviews the story.
This is my opinion

So yes majorly that's it
the plot is good just the writing style can be improved.

The Bloody Side of Hope by mustarrd-
Cover - 2.5/5
Title - 3/5
Blurb - 4/5
Creativity - 4/5
Chapters - 7.5/10
Grammar - 4.5/5
Preciseness - 2.5/3
Character Development - 1/2
Total: 29/40

It's overall good just the character development wasn't there and the story was rushed a bit.
Overall it is good just the cover can be made a bit more attractive and eye-soothing this one is a bit too strong and has readability issues.
The title is not really all that matching to the story.
And yes more or less can be a bit more reader friendly
Rest it's good.

Ron and Harry: Go To Leaky Cauldron by Harrypotter195604
Cover - 4.5/5
Title - 4.5/5
Blurb - 4/5
Creativity - 5/5
Chapters - 9/10
Grammar - 4.5/5
Preciseness - 2.5/3
Character Development - 2/2
Total: 36/40

This is an awesome book somewhat even like a comic. And the book is really good just a bit more effort is all that is required. I honestly loved the character development and yeah its and bits while do need to be worked on but it's nice. The best thing is the contrast between mature yet light-hearted comedy.
And yes I am waiting for the sequel.

The 275th Hunger Games by hermione_everdeen13
Cover - 3/5
Title - 4/5
Blurb - 2/5
Creativity - 4.5/5
Chapters - 6.5/10
Grammar - 4.5/5
Preciseness - 3/3
Character Development - 2/2
Total: 29.5/40

So this is a nice book but the cover doesn't have any readability.
The blurb also doesn't give an overview of the story. The divisions and way of writing can be improved. As there is no preview and the book directly begins with the selection of competitors that needs to be worked over a bit. As someone reading the Hunger Games first time that no proper beginning gets a bit annoying and reduces the personal enjoyment.

||His Darling Red Rose|| by ECB1994
Cover - 4/5
Title - 3.5/5
Blurb - 3/5
Creativity - 4/5
Chapters - 7/10
Grammar - 3/5
Preciseness - 2/3
Character Development - 2/3
Total: 28.5/40

It is a nice book but the writer needs to have a better understanding of content distribution and spelling, grammar.
The pace of the story needs to be slowed as it messes with the character development and even the whole plot.
The idea is beautiful and amazing and so is the cover but the blurb can be shortened a bit.
Overall the writer just needs to work on the distribution part.

The Phoenix - Rise of the Demonic Cultivator by hermiosa_reina
Cover (0-5): 5 points
Title (0-5): 4 points
Blurb (0-5): 3 points
Creativity (0-5): 5 points
Chapters (0-10): 7 points
Grammar (0-5): 3 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 2 points
Character Development: (0-2): 2 points

TOTAL-31/40

Really good writing skills. Continue to harness it. Graphics made it interesting. Just kindly check on a few sentences with regards to past and the present tense. But overall, awesome writing!!! Really.

And the cover really matched the theme of the whole book. Nicely done!

Remember... Please, Remember... - Imfine000Ithink

Cover (0-5): 2 points
Title (0-5): 4 points
Blurb (0-5): 5 points
Creativity (0-5): 4 points
Chapters (0-10): 6 points
Grammar (0-5): 3 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 3 points
Character Development: (0-2): 2 points

TOTAL-29/40

Really interesting storyline. Keep it up. And maybe, you could kindly use quotation marks ("") to show that someone is speaking.

But I really loved the concept though I'm not into the genre. ❤️❤️

Harry Potter Instagram by sophiamalfoy666
Cover (0-5): 3 points
Title (0-5): 3 points
Blurb (0-5): 1 point
Creativity (0-5): 3 points
Chapters (0-10): 3 points
Grammar (0-5): 3 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 3 points
Character Development: (0-2): 1 point

TOTAL-20/40

You could kindly give a blurb though it's an Instagram FanFic, so as to enable others know what the crux of the whole book is, and also follow through with that theme in the entire book.

And the cover was nice, but maybe a little touches here and there would do.
Well done, sweetie!

A COURT OF BASTARDS by crchapman
Cover (0-5): 4 points
Title (0-5): 5 points
Blurb (0-5): 5 points
Creativity (0-5): 5 points
Chapters (0-10): 8 points
Grammar (0-5): 5 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 3 points
Character Development: (0-2): 2 points

TOTAL-37/40

One other amazing book! Storyline is epic and blurb was wonderful. The cover was also creative, with wonderful grammar. Descriptions were amazing!

But don't stop there. A lot is ahead of you, dear!

Harry Potter Next Gen Instagram by @Icst_typs
Cover (0-5): 2 points
Title (0-5): 4 points
Blurb (0-5): 1 point
Creativity (0-5): 4 points
Chapters (0-10): 6 points
Grammar (0-5): 4 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 3 points
Character Development: (0-2): 1 point

TOTAL-25/40

Wonderful effort! You could kindly add a blurb to it that outlines the story line but doesn't give out too much. But I liked the flow! Once again, wonderful work!

Peace or Havoc by flydhaani
Cover (0-5): 3 points
Title (0-5): 5 points
Blurb (0-5): 4 points
Creativity (0-5): 5 points
Chapters (0-10): 6 points
Grammar (0-5): 3 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 3 points
Character Development: (0-2): 2 points

TOTAL-31/40

Good imaginative writing! I'm impressed. But you could kindly check your spacing, paragraphs (esp. during dialogues to make them easier to read), and a bit of the punctuations. And also a few touches to the cover will make it an awesome blend.

But nice work! ✨✨✨

Ginny Weasley: Training in Submission by harryginny2004
Cover (0-5): 3 points
Title (0-5): 5 points
Blurb (0-5): 3 points
Creativity (0-5): 2 points
Chapters (0-10): 7 points
Grammar (0-5): 4 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 3 points
Character Development: (0-2): 2 points

TOTAL-29/40

Amazing title that attracts. You could kindly check the font colour to make the cover pop out some more! And also space out the dialogues a bit more.

And the story has twists and turns unexpected. Keep writing! ✨

^vLost and Found v^ by xmarzyx
Cover (0-5): 5 points
Title (0-5): 4 points
Blurb (0-5): 5 points
Creativity (0-5): 3 points
Chapters (0-10): 4 points
Grammar (0-5): 2 points
Relevance/Preciseness (0-3): 0 points
Character Development: (0-2): 2 points

TOTAL-25/40

Another amazing concept. I enjoyed the story line. But I would humbly suggest you check on your paragraphs, to make the story easier to read. Maybe after every few sentences, and between dialogues. But it's an amazing theme.

Don't give up! You're doing so well already. ❤️

And might I add, the cover suits the title.

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I am extremely pleased to announce the winners of Poetry genre. To those who lost, do not worry. A little bit more hard work and your work is going to win the first place! Winners, please request for your rewards if we forget to deliver them. Our hearty congratulations to all the winners!

🎊 First place goes to:
YADAVI: THE NAME OF YEARNING by dwarkaratna

🎊 Second place goes to:
First Impressions: The Marauders by MissLacybee

A Court of Bastards by crchapman

🎊 Third place goes to:
Star Wars Episode IX: The Descendant of Evil (Novella) ✔ by CroodsGirl


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Ilakshi and Marina ❤

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