This is an update, so don't get your hopes up.

I've just reread what I've written, and I decided to rewrite some things. I just want the story to flow better, to not be so spontaneous, and so you can understand what's going on. The story will be the same, but I'm just rewriting it.

That means I'm taking all the parts of the sorry down. This will be the only remaining chapter in this book for a while. I hope to rewrite at least one chapter every other week, that's a lot considering the fact that school is using me as a punching bag.

Well, I hope you like the revised version, and if you have any suggestions, please leave them in the comments.

Thanks for understanding,
~HawkeyeSmurf