3rd person

Instantly, Shay screamed. She remembered her dream, this...thing was in that dream. "SETO!" Jae screamed. No response.
"D-don-n't ev-ven b-both-bother! The-e-e-ey can-n't he-elp you NOW!" 
"WHAT DID YOU DO TO THEM!?" Jae screamed, anger boiling in her chest. All he did was throw his broken head back and let out a horrific cackle. His body twitched horribly, cracks and gears grinding together every time he did. The black blood dripped from his joints, dripping onto the just cleaned carpet. Queen frowned at this, unhappy that all that work was ruined....then she realized this monster was going to rip her apart and instantly became alarmed. Jae, the only one seeming to think correctly at the moment, looked around for an escape. He was blocking the main hallway out of there, then there was the kitchen, that lead to a dead-end, then the front door. She only realized just now that the door handle...was broken off. It was more then likely that it was locked from the outside. No way to escape then...unless they all could somehow get past him. He laughed darkly, "R-RE-READY TO D-D-DIE!?" And with that, he jumped at the closest person, Queen. "QUEEN! RUN!" Jae screamed. The child stumbled back, narrowly avoiding snapping jaws. Her eyes widened her eyes in fear. Before she could react, Sky attacked again. This time however...she wasn't as lucky. He racked his claws down her chest. She screamed as blood spilled from the new wound. He shoved her down, falling on her back. Sky jumped over her, forgetting about the bleeding out child. He leaped at the next. Shay. She was still frozen with fear. Anytime she was in a bad situation...she would just..lock up. His jaws opened wide...and enclosed around the Shays head, not sinking his teeth in just yet. She screamed and struggled, resulting in teeth slightly cutting her neck. She stopped, tears streaming down her face. Then...very...very slowly...his teeth sunk into her neck. A small trickle of blood dribbled out. She screamed louder. Why was he going so slow? Shay screamed louder as his teeth, just barley, sunk into her neck. He bit harder and harder. By now, blood dripped down his jaw and teeth. Behind him, a loud screech sounded. His mouth instantly snapped open, the girl fell to the floor. She was still conscious, her body shook, blood flowing from her neck. Rage filled red eyes glared at him. Ty. It was Ty. He grabbed his own Jaw with both of his claws or hands, and, with a loud sickening crack, he ripped and broke his jaw. His teeth grew longer. His tongue slithered out a loud hiss coming from his throat. All around his torso it ripped open. Teeth slid out, all around. It was similar to Sky's but...it literally went ALL around. The torso jaw opened wide, his upper body rising up, a long thick-ish wire connecting the two bodies. Ty's eyes closed, and when they opened again, they were pitch black, a small bright red pupil in the center, a thin white line around it. He screeched and jumped at Sky.

Enden it der cauze I'm evial -3-