HELLO GUYS
WOW THOSE STORIES WERE AMAZING!!!!!!! LITERALLY FABULOUS
Some I shed a tear and others I balled my eyes out!!!!! 😭😭😭😭yes like the emoji
Right so I'm going to do some small feedback on all the stories and say what I like and all the klunking!!!!

But first shout out to the contestants:
_Newts_limp_

Gangster_Sangster

emma_and_orlando

thecrazyfangirl123

All of you guys were amazing. and I have decided to do a joint third cause I just COULD NOT DECIDE!!!!!!!

Well I'm gonna do feedback now, starting in no particular order......

_Newts_limp_ : " my tommy "

WOWED ME TO THE MOON AND BACK!!!!

Right this story was really touching and bought tears to my eyes, it is also the classic "please Tommy please" thing. it really tore me apart but made me laugh too.

"Sir? Honey I'm a crank"
Haha it sass it funny but also rather sad cause yeah reminding the reader that newt is a crank.

What also touched me was how our blonde angel killed then realised what he had done. It just made me plain sad.

I loved how you did a Thomas POV cause most people just leave it at newts POV.

And probably the worst part was,

" I walked back thinking about my future without newt, my newt "

That reared me up inside and I just couldn't imagine how Thomas must have felt in this story.

Amazing job well done!!!!!

NEXT

thecrazyfangirl123 : Alone

WOWZERZ IN SHUCKING TROUSERS!!!!

This story was unique because it was after Newts death, which was unexpected and amazingly done.

The reaction and all from Minho and Thomas were very well written and made me extremely upset.

I loved how thomas broke down shouting at Minho telling him about newts limp and all it was very upsetting..... well done

The bits like
"Please newt come back" were the things the got me crying cause it was so heart felt and me just could not cope.

Saddest line for me:

" I should've told him, now he will never know,"

And then Thomas ends it to be with Newt which was just beautiful. Now they will be forever together.

Wonderful job

NEXT

emma_and_orlando : You'll never know me.

ABSOLUTELY B E A U T I F U L!!

This was different cause u no different place and all.

It was very descriptive about the characters.

"Dude, I'm so sorry for you he is like the weirdest weirdo in a weirdland"

Things like this made me laugh so much.

I liked how you partnered up the two, it worked really well

The thing for me is when I read back over it I can see the build up to the horrible truth but when I was reading it the first time I couldn't see it so it hit much harder.

"I like watching people,"
Sounded creepy at first but then I read on and I found that its deeper
"You'll never know me."
Written throughout the entire story which is really effective and made me very upset and emotional.

When the time came in the story when Thomas finds out about Newts illness
"I have cancer"
I was sobbing

When it came to Newts death I was bawling my eyes out. It was so descriptive and touching and emotional but I just could not stop crying and had to put my iPod down several times to get over my hysterics.

This same reaction happened when I read Thomases presentation of the project they had started. it was so moving that again I had to put down my iPod so I could get over my tears.

Newts letter to Thomas in the end of the story was like the icing on the cake, it was so SAD it was just amazing and touching and beautiful and I just...... I just couldn't deal with it and Now that letter is stuck permanently in my head and whenever I think about it I cry my eyes out.

Amazing piece of writing it blew me away

Saddest Lines in my opinion:

"His beautiful dying boyfriend"

"I'm sick of crying. tired of trying, yes I'm smiling but from inside I'm dying,"

"A handful of moments I wish I could change.... But maybe I don't want you to change,"

"Newt?" - "Newt...Newt please...come back,"

"Remember I love you."

NEXT

Gangster_Sangster : Until the end

REDUCED ME TO A SOBBING MESS!!

Probably the longest story because it was made into chapters.
(First chapter)

I like how the story was set in paradise and how are blonde angel survives I am still a little confused on how because it wasn't made you know perfectly but that didn't really change my view on the story.

"Did you need it?"
Oh Gally for some reason I found this absolutely hilarious

F**k you Brenda just F**k you!!!
Newtmas is beautiful.

I loved the sad and touching reunion!!

"Tommy! Where have you been??!!"
"I've been crying over you"

(I'm just saying no I'm only doing first and last chapter)

ALL OF ME!!! So perfect

"And give you me-"
I felt hello connect with my face and I fell on the bed with a grown,

"SHUT UP!!" Minho yelled

Newt laughed

"You know I need my beauty sleep and fabulousness doesn't come easy!!!"
SO SOOOOOO FUNNY !!!!!

(Last chapter)

"Tommy, let me sleep, let me have my long nap. Let me answer the final summons"
"I...I love you"

This made me cry very hard, what also made me sob was that newt was buried.....and this one line,

"He's in a better place"
Boo hoo hoo really I'm serious

Saddest LINES in my opinion:
we sat in silence. I swear I could fell Newts arm around my shoulders, Teresa holding onto my arm and Chuck behind me smiling,
"Do you feel like here with us?" Minho whispered
He felt it too
"Yeah, even when they're not here, they end up still being here with us,"

Soooooo beautiful!!!

"Our family had shrunken, smaller and smaller until three people were left, one thing I knew for sure we were a family, until the end."

Very touching very beautiful and amazing and ahhhhh

Soooooooo that was the feed back and guys I really enjoyed your stories you all are sooooo talented!!!!!!

Sooo without further ado....... the results!!!!!!

In joint third is........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

_Newts_limp_ &thecrazyfangirl123

My Tommy & Alone!!!!!

WELL DONE YOU GUYS
I loved your story's they were superb!!!!
AMAZEBALLS
LUV U GUYS
If you forget what you prize is look back at the contest information!!!!
THANX FOR ENTERING THERE WILL BE MORE CONTESTS SOON!!!
😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Right now second place is ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Gangster_Sangster

Until the end!!!!!

Truly beautiful story I loved it very much!!!!!!
LUV YA V. MUCH

Which means our winner of the "Plz Tommy Plz" Challenge is
.................................................................................................................................................................................(just for fun😄😄😄😄😄😄)....................................................................................................................................................
emma_and_orlando

YOU'LL NEVER KNOW ME!!!!

Stunning would fit. It made me sob sooooo hard it was unbelievable so congrats!!!!!

THANX YOU GUYS FOR ENTERING THE CONTEST, I HAVE DECIDED TO DO ONE EVERY TWO MONTHS OR SO HOPE YOU ENJOYED. ALL INFORMATION ABOUT THE CONTEST IS ON CHAPTER 2?? OF 'ROAD TRIP GONE WRONG'

LUV YA ALL SOOOOO MUCH

🌺Hannah🌺