Newfangled Modish Group competition
Top 7

fierce_icers

Love :A heal to everything

Overall review from the_naughty_princess

-Title was appropriate to a vague extent.

-Required Plot Rules were adhered to mostly, but the fairy-tale element was missing and humor was scarce...and I think the villain was supposed to be after Laksh and Swara...not Sanskar and Swara.

-Descriptions started off nicely then got lost somewhere in the story.

- Character Exploration was ok, but this story was supposed to feature parallel lead siblings, Laksh and Swara and their love interests. Laksh and Ragini's story faded into the background.

-Beautiful sibling bond between Laksh and Swara.

-Scenes were ok

-Thoughts/Feelings and Emotions were good.

-Dialogues were ok

-Presentation and Narration was a bit weak.

-Ending was good.

Grade: 25/40

Overall review from emananadeer8

Most of the points mentioned in the plot were used. Character exploration was good, though it was focused on Swasan and Sahil only. Descriptions were all good, but there was incompleteness and lacking of a lot of scenes. Dialogue delivery was perfect in most of the parts. Childhood life was perfectly n portrayed and shown too, grown up life pretty much perfectly portrayed on Swara’s part but not of Laksh, his wasn’t justified, love story of swasan was very well shown and conveyed but no justification for Raglak’s story, it was nil to be precise, Villian’s life was very well portrayed and the ending was sorta rushed and incomplete too. Humour was lacking and in most parts mystery too. Perfect title and nice cover.

Marks : 23/40

Final scores of group competition and os

The_naughty_princess : 25/40 and 13/20 =38
Emananadeer8 :23/40 and 17.5/20 = 40.5
Mounikajaanu2002 :20/40 and 11/20 =31
Angelshiva :26.5/40 and 15/20 = 41.5
Freakss:37.5

So the grand total: 188.5