Newfangled Modish Awards

The team Dreamers

Overall review from the_naughty_princess

-Title was appropriate

-Good Intro

-Descriptions were good, but still lacking in certain areas.

- Character Exploration was ok.

-Grammatical Errors were there.

-Required Plot Rules weren't properly adhered to.

-Scenes were good, but more could have been added.

-Thoughts/Feelings and Emotions were good.

-Dialogues were good.

-Presentation and Narration was ok. I felt that, although the POV of both leads were good, it was a bit unnecessary. The same thoughts and feelings could have been written into the original narration instead of having separate chapters.

-Ending was good.

Overall review from emananadeer8

All the points were properly and effectively used and conveyed. Character exploration was amazingly done, except there was a lacking on both of the parents part. Descriptions were amazingly amazing ones, especially throughout the first half of the story. Dialogue delivery was amazing in the mentioned parts, but there was a little lacking here and there. Really loved the narration of the story but i felt that towards the end it sort of felt like the story was being dragged, especially the last part and epilogue....all the both of those parts were sweet and beautiful, it kinda had a feel of being dragged. The the title was an apt one and the cover was a really good ones. 
Marks : 32

Scores of group story and os
The_naughty_princess :25/40 and 13.5/20
Emananadeer8 :32/40 and 17.5/20
Mounikajaanu2002 :25/40 and 14/20
Angelshiva :21/40 and 12.5/20
Freakss :40

Grand Total:200.5/300