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7 Riddles In Our Love Story

29/40

In some place there was lack of description, and humour factor was applied lately and the character exploration was also explained lately
Everything was there but lately!
Other than it was ok

DENIGRATED

i really wished to give full marks, just for the plot and some hearty scenes and no doubt the dialogues. The dialogue you used for Ragini's character in the court are said to be 'dialogues without fear' . The dialogues left the mark really!
And i would suggest you about your writing that don't use dots in between  the sentences, your writing doesn't have grammatical errors but the dots in between creates the one and you use punctuations in required places rather than dots then there's no grammatical errors And also proof read it!

So the marks is 18.5/20
Just for the errors caused and little description about 2 things which mentioned in description

Total 47.5/60

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