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Melody of two hearts

35/40

expected more intensity in their first meet and swasan moments were less like it was there but the feeling swara had later for sanskar which dearly needed intensity filled scenes!there were some small errors!

And everything was on it's place!

INTEQAM

14/20

Because there's a lot of unanswered questions in mind and lack of character exploration. But the plot was still amazing and you can make it best still.. Your writing is so good and i hope if you correct these minor mistakes, you would be a perfect writer

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