Pyaar - Ek Lamba Intezaar
By AngelGoldieReal

conversation way of writing style, there are many, good!

-Plot
It was related to show, so basically you could have tried some other plots.
But still your plot related to a cute relation of husband and wife and also with the twist Sanskar being Sanju Kapoor

-character exploration
This topic didn't arrived in my mind because you have continued a show related!
But still Sanju kapoor's character been explored but still confused

-description of the scene
Description of the missing moments of swara is been good
And also she had the feeling that sanskar would go far away from her
It was good
And swara's cute fake anger on sanskar was also awesome!
But still, if Sanskar has died then why did sanju came for the revenge of kavitha's death? If they were look alike too why did he tried to take revenge from Sanskar's family?then kavitha's return and all! And how did sahil connected to Rajath's part?
So the description was lacking!

-descriptive thoughts
The part you have mentioned thoughts were nice!
But still it was lacking due to the scenic description

-Dialogue delivery
Some Dialogues were excellent
And in some places Dialogues weren't used!!
And Sanskar(sanju)'s final dialogue was amazing!

-Introduction
Introduction was nothing special, as it just continued from the show

-ending
Ending was nice, but still the story was incomplete

-Title
Title is nice but it didn't match like if the story continues

-cover
It was simple and good

All in all
It was good, but confusions has been arisen
And you should have tried something else..
Because the plot related to show made disappointing!

Sorry if you felt hurt, but my intention isn't to hurt you
But i really felt this story was incomplete
You have the potential to be the best
All the best
-Shruthi