INTEQAAM
By Crazy_Sidhantian

-Plot
It was good, mostly a used topic
Love, Revenge and realisation was the main 3 things focused in this story

-Character exploration
Swara's character isn't explored much felt she was different in first half(start to flashbacks) and second half
You should have kept linked it
Sanskar's character was explored to some extent and sanskrit's character is some what confusing..
How he got saved from the incident?
And just because saving swara how can he think there's a relation between them..
When he himself knew she don't know sanskar!! id card confusion too he knew!
It was lame to think like that and there was no strong reason that he could take such a big revenge!
His character isn't explored!

-description of the scene
Didn't sanskar got doubt that he is been drugged? As he forgets the incident of last night and it continued to many days!
So it was not detailed
And also how did sanskar react when swara got consciousness and spoke to him thinking him to be sanskrit, he didn't knew her right?
And also sanskrit's description which mentioned in exploration
This was an incomplete story!
Other than this you have described neatly! Either it would be the swara's reven or some flashbacks or swara's search for sanskar or times when sanskar was in hospital

-descriptive thoughts
To the scenes you have mentioned, thoughts and feelings were good
But still it was lacking due there were some important scenes where thoughts were also required!

-dialogue delivery
Dialogue delivery was excellent!! But you could have added some more intensive and inspirational Dialogues about trust at the beginning!

-introduction
Introduction was good but remember it could be best

-ending
It was ok..
Because,there was an incompleteness!

Title
Interesting title, Good!

Cover
It was simple and good!

All in all
This os could be perfect if you just added those required points! Lots of questions has arisen while reading it.
Anyways it was nice!

And sorry if you felt hurt by my reviews,this is just my point of view, and you can make it best!
-Shruthi