Justajoo
By Sally_Blr

-Plot
It was good, you linked the os to your group story
Where in previous birth aditya was shaad and zoya was safa
And also Shahryar and Ryah are Sanskar and Ragini respectively!
But the plot expectations were not this, that linking to group story..
So basically it was not a eye catchy plot!
It was more like an epilogue for the group story!

-Character exploration
You explored the character to good extent but still there was some incompleteness!! Like aditya and zoya's characters could be explored more

-description of the scene
Your description was amazing, but there was lack of some scene's as you could have given some scenes when aditya and zoya were in relationship!
You just have shown their breakup

-descriptive thoughts
To the part wherever you mentioned, thoughts were amazing!

-dialogue delivery
This was nice..
Either it would be Aditya, Ragini, Zoya or Arjun everybody's dialogue delivery was perfect!dialogues of sarcasm was applied beautifully!! A humour in some dialogues were too amazing

-Introduction
Introduction of plot was excellent with excellent descriptions of Aditya's dream

-ending
Ending was also excellent with topic of history repeats again same way Shahryar and Ryah's story repeats again in their rebirth as Sanskar and Ragini

-Title
It was good

-cover
It was simple and good

All in all
It was good..
But you should have tried some other plot!

And your descriptions and delivery of dialogue shows the perfection!
But the plot you have chose is disappointing!!
Sorry if you felt hurt!
-shruthi