Magnetic love by sanyayaa

-Cover

It's simple and good,and perfect for the story

-Title

A good title, it describes Sanskar's magnetic love

-Character exploration

Character's have been explored beautifully.  Sanskar's character was explored beautifully.

-description of the scene

Description of the scenes were brilliant.
With swarna and swara's bonding, then swarna's hate or swara and sanskar's cute scenes. Sanskar's outburst on Swarna was brilliant. Swarna's hate, or Swara's love for her sister and love confession was nice.
Everything was nice.

-Descriptive thoughts

Thoughts could be made better, like if swarna was blindly in love with Sanskar too, didn't she had second thought on swara as she was like a mother to swara, here little description on thoughts were needed as it was not clear. And even in the part of swara.
And sanskar's thoughts were excellent in the part of making swarna realise her mistake.
It was good but it could be made excellent

-dialogue delivery

Some dialogues were excellent but some were weak.
And the dialogue where swara expressed to swarna that she will not complain even if she takes her life, it was touching.

-Introduction and ending
Introduction and ending were awesome.

-Presentation

Presentation were superb with detailed description

-Innovation
This part was something lacking, you could have innovated differently

Overall
Awesome but still lacking of emotions, even though it had comics love scenes or some cute scenes but the emotional elements couldn't be conveyed smoothly.

You have to wait until the judging completes, until then all the best!