Review From Freakss (2)
Love isn't Complicated by cutieees
-Title
Title was good. Some parts it do matched!
-Cover
Cover was sweet and good and perfect for the story.
-Character exploration
Avni and Ananya's characters were ok, but Niel's status was seriously lacking. All the other was ok.
-description of the scene
Avneil's meet was quite good.
Scenes were lacking as in you mentioned avni's hate didn't decreased, and liking him was also ok but love was bit rush. and also how ananya found changes in Niel that she changed her decision on wedding day as she already knew Neil's feeling for avni and also avni's feelings.
And the scenes where Neil encouraging avni was really good and also the scenes where ananya speaks her heart out and ashish's words were quite impressive. And the both proposal scenes were excellent.
If some things were described with scenes, then the description could be the excellent one.
-descriptive thoughts
Ananya's feelings were justified, according to her character.
If the Feelings of Neil and Avni were described, thoughts would have been really perfect.
-dialogue delivery
Some dialogues were excellent and some could be better.
Overall it was amazing.
-Introduction and ending
First of all the preface you have added was excellent.
Introduction of the story was good and also ending was really very good, as it end with a good note.
-Presentation
This could be made better with exploration and scenes
-Innovation
Awesome!!but still the little more work on exploring and describing would have been the lime light of your story.
Overall
It's Awesome but it could be excellent if required things were on it's place.
You have to wait till judging to know if you are promoted to second round or not!
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