Encounters of fate

Prologue

Excellent!!
Either it would be a description dialogue or scenes
Everything was perfect!
And Gayatri's character exploration was too good
Words for woman's were really appreciated!!

Totally Great, Great and Great Job

First Part

Beautiful!!!

Everything was beautiful..
And there were scenes where we could feel the goosebumps
And cute moments between Gaya-tree and harrison was just 'Aww'
And guess the required supernatural thing has started...
Brilliantly penned down!

Second part

Everything was nice
Gayatri's anger..
And mystery about a professor Dr hector has opened
And Harrison being a son of Indian lady was very interesting

And 'wow' moments between Gaya-aa-tree and brahmadev was so cute!

Amazing!!!

Third part

Nice....
There were some humour with 'MARRY ME'.. Haha
And also amazing scenes with amazing description of scenes but somewhere the descriptive thoughts were missing!
And new entry Iqbal Tyabji brought some thrill into the story!

Great job

Fourth part

An amazing part.. Despite having everything described beautifully still some part's were little incomplete
Dialogue's were superb about the country came!
There were some cute moments between the leads
And Gayatree addressing dave harrison as brahmdev ji kamdev ji was hilarious those moments could be imagined! And his proposals 'aww'
Overall it's awesome

Fifth part

Amazing!!!
The track iqbal syabji ended by taking revenge and making everything back in peace
And now what needs is woman empowerment...!!!
And the separation track was good.. Gayatree's letter and dave's understanding nature there goes the heart
And still the people didn't change...
And dave's entry was too good on the right time
And this time gayatri proposed him 'wow'
So what next?

Amazingly penned down!

Epilogue

Fantastic!!!

Hmm what to say lacking words!!
Dave turned 92 and gayatree 82..hmm pretty good
And shraddha would continue Gayatri's struggle!! Amazing
And freedom moments were also described good
Everything was on it's place!!

Every parts were outstanding!!
Met the expectations!

Love beyond time

First part

Prologue was good!
This part was good with the past story.. Description was good but still expected more!
And laksh's character was explored beautifully!
Expected Ragini's character exploration
Laksh's support on his love was brilliant
And at last you created a twist of misunderstanding which is really amazing!!!

Second part

Nice!!!
Amazing tashan between Raglak
Good description of the scene
Ragini's prank and laksh's prank of frustrating one another was good
But didn't expected this soon they would be for each other
Will read next chapter and will tell you!
Character exploration was good and also the dialogue delivery

Third part!

Good..
Raglak remembered their past
But some confusion were created
And also some description weren't enough
And kavya's entry was nice but it could be better!

Fourth part

Good to listen the story again through Ragini's POV
Described beautifully
You could covey her feelings beautifully
Ragini's character was explored brilliantly

Fifth part

Again story repeated it was nice to listen through laksh's POV
Described beautiful
Descriptive thoughts were also good
You have conveyed laksh's feelings very well
Laksh's character was also explored brilliantly

Sixth part

Nice!!
With beautiful cute proposal
But still it could have been better!
And somewhere there was some incompleteness!

Epilogue

This part was beautiful with cute family moments
Raksh was so cute!
And description could be better
And dialogue delivery was nice

And overall story was nice
Your plot asked male & female leads should be Antagonist to each other in the second story it didn't look like the one it was like simple tashan love story!
And first story was ok
And climax should be action filled one we didn't get the one
Didn't meet the expectations!

Masquerade love:a tale of unexpected

First part

It was nice description of Sanskar's wife's and plus scenes too
And swara's character was explored but it could have been better!
And sanskar has entered as soldier and witnessed her
Nice.. But it could be best if there was some more decription

Second part

Something unexpected!! As title

Sanskar is obsessed!! Hmm good
Swara' s intelligence again her character were explored beautifully
Her beautiful life with her husband is shown
Sanskar's move is confusing
Anyways it was nice!

Third part

Good part!
And this part was also good
But lacking description!
Like everything went like a rush
Anyways the dialogues were superb!!

Fourth part

This part was good
And swara's bravery was shown but Sanskar's evil plans were above everything
And kavitha's dream crashed which was bit fun
Descriptive thoughts and scenes and most importantly dialogues were too good
Great job

Fifth part

This was also an awesome part
With describing sanskar and sanskrit bond
Also swaragini bond
And swara's nature
And Sanskar's hearty words were amazing
Good description of scenes thoughts and dialogues
And also kept the mystery about Sahil's death
Great job

Sixth part

Absolutely amazing climax
With good description and dialogues
And swara's death was shocking and
Sanskar's realisation were also good
later swara's kids were look after by Sanskar and Ragini.. Which was good
And kavitha paid for her deed
Everything was smooth and nice

But overall after the 4th part it was all good
Didn't reach the expectations
As felt everything was in rush! Lack of description at start!

Reviews of os's are given soon..