Descriptions and A/N
A/N: I need to put this out there so hopefully some of my readers see it and help, I NEED help so bad on what to write!! Please I don't want to put this book on hold or discontinue it. When I first started this book I was hoping for a long cool book, and when I actually started to get higher on chapters I blanked out. I'm sorry if this chapter is cheesy and not what you expected but consider this a cry for help. Anyway I wanted to at least do a little bit of a real chapter for you guys so I'm going to go through the description of FlameStar for you. Yes I know there isn't a picture but that is because my sister won't draw a pic of her for me, since she is already working on one for my other book that isn't published. So your gonna have to use your imagination on this one. (I'll add a pic of FlameStar when my sister is done with it. Which won't be for a while so you might have to come back to this chapter a little while later.)
FlameStars build is similar to SmokeScreens except she is a little shorter. Like a centimeter shorter than him. And the door wings aren't there, her doors are her arms. I just pulled a KO lol never mind. She has a red color that covers her torso and her helm. And where the autobot insignia is on smokescreen its on her shoulders. Her legs are silver and she has a small shoe design type thing on her peds, which are colored black. Her peds are shaped kind of like a sneaker only the wedge at the bottom heel is a inch taller.
Her arm plating is red as well but there are streaks of black and white, also her arm plating goes to the end of her arm but I goes a bit further on a V shape over her servo and on her palm as well. Her optics are exactly like BumbleBees only with a few upgrades. They zoom in and focus like his but when they do she has an option of x-Ray, or night vision. Her helm is shaped like SmokeScreens as well except for the face design stuff and the wing things at the top of his helm.
What have I not gone over yet........ Oh! Her servos are also colored black, like she has gloves on. And they black covers up to her digit tips. Also the little hook things on SmokeScreens chassis aren't there and I think I forgot to put this up there, she's a bit skinnier than him to. But not by a lot. Okay I think I covered everything comment if you want more description on a part that I either didn't go over or didn't describe well enough.
Vote, comment, and fallow if you already aren't. Please help on what you want to happen next!! Well anyway love you all who have stuck with this book, and thank you all who are dying for more!! That means that this book is actually better than I thought it is! And the picture at the top was not drawn by me, my sister nor anybody I know, I was searching online for photos and I liked this one. TFL25 OUT!!!
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