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Book: A Vigilante
Author: awritrr
Genre: Action
COVER
So starting with the cover... i really love how simple but elegant it is. One thing tho i feel like the title doesn't really stand out, maybe you can change it to a bright white color, so its more attractive and appealing.
BLURB
Now the blurb is the thing that grab readers attention and pulls them directly into the story, and yours had exactly that!! There was a verirty of words used, and the thing that hooked me was the first sentence.... "Sarvani Patel lives a double life." Amazing opening line!!!
CHARACTER AESTHETIC
Okay, moving on to the character aesthetics... lets just say i loved them, especially the main male and females... they are amazing!
CHAPTER 1
I loved how it started with action... her being drugged, it immediately got my attention and had wondering all sorts off stuff, which is good for an action story. I seriously loved the female bad ass, and the power she held!
GRAMMAR
To be truthful, i searched for mistakes or typos, but the thing was that i could find any... good work with the editing.
OVERALL
Overall, this was an amazing read and would recommend to anyone. This story will also be going in my reading list as a platinum read and my library, to help me reach future chapters... good luck with your future work!!
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